for A Whatever In Need6/7/2010 c4 
11SuperPaige
...did you seriously write 'frig ya'? Really, sestra? Just use the actual word, c'mon, you know what it is! "FU,CK"
Anyways, I like it, as usual! Goodsies!
11SuperPaige...did you seriously write 'frig ya'? Really, sestra? Just use the actual word, c'mon, you know what it is! "FU,CK"
Anyways, I like it, as usual! Goodsies!
4/8/2010 c2 SuperPaige
One chapter left to go! So far, so good. I really like, though you seem to be a big fan on fragments *tsk tsk* You made Bulma very emotional, and I HATE the way she jumped to conclusions like that! Not good for someone who's supposed to be a damned genius! Keep going, sestra, I can't read more!
One chapter left to go! So far, so good. I really like, though you seem to be a big fan on fragments *tsk tsk* You made Bulma very emotional, and I HATE the way she jumped to conclusions like that! Not good for someone who's supposed to be a damned genius! Keep going, sestra, I can't read more!
4/6/2010 c1 SuperPaige
Got the first chapter down! LOL, I liked it when Bulma called him the great Griffin Prince of three and one fourth alien primates! Very nice so far!
Got the first chapter down! LOL, I liked it when Bulma called him the great Griffin Prince of three and one fourth alien primates! Very nice so far!
1/6/2010 c2 9BunniGirl
So..what happens? I'm dying to know what Vegeta's going to do to win back his mate's trust!
9BunniGirlSo..what happens? I'm dying to know what Vegeta's going to do to win back his mate's trust!
12/9/2009 c2 7omnipotent Porunga
poor, poor Veggie...
amongst all the mess, i really feel sorry for the faithful, framed alien...
7omnipotent Porungapoor, poor Veggie...
amongst all the mess, i really feel sorry for the faithful, framed alien...
11/30/2009 c1 2ps.steam
I didn't think there was anything wrong with that. It was great! Keep writing1
2ps.steamI didn't think there was anything wrong with that. It was great! Keep writing1
11/25/2009 c1 14Viva Del Amore
It is really good.I glad that our plot isn't the same. Very Enjoyable.
14Viva Del AmoreIt is really good.I glad that our plot isn't the same. Very Enjoyable.
11/9/2009 c1 75Satu-D-2
This is very interesting so far. I like how things have gone. The way you portrayed Bulma's reaction is very good. I can't wait to read more :D Good work ^^
75Satu-D-2This is very interesting so far. I like how things have gone. The way you portrayed Bulma's reaction is very good. I can't wait to read more :D Good work ^^
11/3/2009 c1 Blackpanther1985
i enjoy what i read i hope there is more to come.
i enjoy what i read i hope there is more to come.