for Hit By Destiny5/4 c57 Guest
Written like fucking cheap white trailer trash. Cunt Bella virgin queen has no mouth to stand up for herself,no fucking self respect. Emmett, Alice, Kate, ALL FUCKING INTERFERING BITCHES
Written like fucking cheap white trailer trash. Cunt Bella virgin queen has no mouth to stand up for herself,no fucking self respect. Emmett, Alice, Kate, ALL FUCKING INTERFERING BITCHES
4/3 c57 
1tweetytweets
Hi,
This is such a beautiful story, very well thought out and processes at a seemingly natural pace. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.
1tweetytweetsHi,
This is such a beautiful story, very well thought out and processes at a seemingly natural pace. Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.
3/25 c1 mommy4
I just wanna say that I have read this book multiple times. It’s probably one of my favorites. Don’t get me wrong there are some errors in it. But it is very well written especially of you. Writing it at a younger age and I feel like it Shows him not changing himself, but still bettering himself.
I just wanna say that I have read this book multiple times. It’s probably one of my favorites. Don’t get me wrong there are some errors in it. But it is very well written especially of you. Writing it at a younger age and I feel like it Shows him not changing himself, but still bettering himself.
2/20 c57 1xfantasywishesx
This story was amazing. I started reading it so many years ago im glad i came back to finally finish it!
1xfantasywishesxThis story was amazing. I started reading it so many years ago im glad i came back to finally finish it!
1/23 c13 3Czechm8
At least Edward is feeling something. It was certainly traumatic for anyone to go through. I wonder how he gets through these feelings. I sense he will with more respect for others.
3Czechm8At least Edward is feeling something. It was certainly traumatic for anyone to go through. I wonder how he gets through these feelings. I sense he will with more respect for others.
1/23 c4 Czechm8
If you don't have a strong support system, it's hard to bring yourself back together. Unfortunately, grief has no time line. I wish people would understand that, because telling them how to feel is unsuccessful, generally speaking.
If you don't have a strong support system, it's hard to bring yourself back together. Unfortunately, grief has no time line. I wish people would understand that, because telling them how to feel is unsuccessful, generally speaking.
1/23 c2 Czechm8
Looking at yourself and not liking who you see. It's a harsh reality, but also an opportunity to change into the person you want to be. I was lucky in that I was never bullied. There was a situation in the 8th grade with some name calling, but I brought him to the principal's office and showed him. I wasn't bullied in high school either. I was on the All-A Honor Roll and on the Varsity Baseball Team.
No one seems to care about Bella. It's an unfortunate situation; one that is not easily fixed.
Looking at yourself and not liking who you see. It's a harsh reality, but also an opportunity to change into the person you want to be. I was lucky in that I was never bullied. There was a situation in the 8th grade with some name calling, but I brought him to the principal's office and showed him. I wasn't bullied in high school either. I was on the All-A Honor Roll and on the Varsity Baseball Team.
No one seems to care about Bella. It's an unfortunate situation; one that is not easily fixed.
1/14 c57 Guest
Fuk off Kate. Too much happening in this last chapter
Fuk off Kate. Too much happening in this last chapter
11/27/2024 c59 Guest
I mean that with love btw. Not hate.
You are a brilliant writer.
Sorry if I hurt you.
I mean that with love btw. Not hate.
You are a brilliant writer.
Sorry if I hurt you.
11/27/2024 c59 Guest
I am surprised by inconsistent to you spell Maia throughout the story on Wattpad. It pulls you out of the plot.
I would suggest you read through Constant again and make sure that it is editted better. There are missing starts of sentences or typos.
I will always rate Hit by Destiny 100/100. I read it all within 30 hours.
Sadly I feel the first few chapters to Constant are info dump. I felt like skimming and by chapter 10 you still hadn't gotten to the point and I got bored and stopped reading. The characters didnt pull me in. Maya (Maia) is bland and has nothing interesting. She just comes off as judgey. At least with Bella she was an underdog. She was bullied. You wanted to support her. For Maya its like... is she supporting her or not?
If she is barely tolerable then the rest of the characters... I just don't care about any of them. They are not unique and bring nothing special. And Joyce? Is that a name given to teens nowadays? I still didnt understand why the oils were so bad by the time if the crash. Just that it people picked on her for the smell...which it smells good why you complaining and Maya just hates the smell like she seems to hate everything about life.
Mrs Morrison is somehow angry with them. No idea why and dont even care why.
I love Hit by Destiny and I always will. It is a masterpiece. Constant needs work. It has potential, I mean same author afterall. It needs more love. Though I don't feel was needed. Just minor tweaks to HBD and changing some names you could have sold it on Amazon.
I am surprised by inconsistent to you spell Maia throughout the story on Wattpad. It pulls you out of the plot.
I would suggest you read through Constant again and make sure that it is editted better. There are missing starts of sentences or typos.
I will always rate Hit by Destiny 100/100. I read it all within 30 hours.
Sadly I feel the first few chapters to Constant are info dump. I felt like skimming and by chapter 10 you still hadn't gotten to the point and I got bored and stopped reading. The characters didnt pull me in. Maya (Maia) is bland and has nothing interesting. She just comes off as judgey. At least with Bella she was an underdog. She was bullied. You wanted to support her. For Maya its like... is she supporting her or not?
If she is barely tolerable then the rest of the characters... I just don't care about any of them. They are not unique and bring nothing special. And Joyce? Is that a name given to teens nowadays? I still didnt understand why the oils were so bad by the time if the crash. Just that it people picked on her for the smell...which it smells good why you complaining and Maya just hates the smell like she seems to hate everything about life.
Mrs Morrison is somehow angry with them. No idea why and dont even care why.
I love Hit by Destiny and I always will. It is a masterpiece. Constant needs work. It has potential, I mean same author afterall. It needs more love. Though I don't feel was needed. Just minor tweaks to HBD and changing some names you could have sold it on Amazon.
11/26/2024 c59 Guest
Wait... you aint selling the original?
Dude!
Wait... you aint selling the original?
Dude!
11/26/2024 c1 Flippysten
I've been looking for this story but couldn't remember the name... so excited I found it!
I've been looking for this story but couldn't remember the name... so excited I found it!