for Hit By Destiny11/30/2009 c15 Triinu
maybe one huge baby steo from Edward in next chptar...that would be nice, wouldn't it
maybe one huge baby steo from Edward in next chptar...that would be nice, wouldn't it
11/30/2009 c15 BlankBlankBitch
I don't think I have ever hated Edward so much in a fic in my life! OMG! He is such a pathetic jack ass. I really just want Bella to get better and then go to college and meet a sweet guy that is not EDWARD! He needs to be hit by a 18-wheeler! UGH! Well I can't wait for more. I know this is going to be an Edward/Bella story but I am interested to see how you turn all of this around.
Update soon!
-Parker
I don't think I have ever hated Edward so much in a fic in my life! OMG! He is such a pathetic jack ass. I really just want Bella to get better and then go to college and meet a sweet guy that is not EDWARD! He needs to be hit by a 18-wheeler! UGH! Well I can't wait for more. I know this is going to be an Edward/Bella story but I am interested to see how you turn all of this around.
Update soon!
-Parker
11/30/2009 c15 lotusblomsten
A douch taking baby steps, interresting point:), nice and good writen cap btw, finally something is happening
A douch taking baby steps, interresting point:), nice and good writen cap btw, finally something is happening
11/30/2009 c15 tkeaton1
every once in a while we see a side to edward we all love... but 90% of the time he is a total scumbag! Cant wait to see how you turn him around. :)
every once in a while we see a side to edward we all love... but 90% of the time he is a total scumbag! Cant wait to see how you turn him around. :)
11/30/2009 c15 beans and cornbread
He is such an ASSHOLE! There is no nice way to put it. You can not have that much of a black heart.
He is such an ASSHOLE! There is no nice way to put it. You can not have that much of a black heart.
11/30/2009 c15 
3celtic mommy
At the rate Edward is growing a conscience, this story is going to be a few hundred chapters long. I just have no words for his asshattery.
Emmett's reaction to everything seems very in line with his 'character'. Edward may thinks he's being girly, but I like that he has some compassion in him and has been affected by the accident even though he wasn't involved.
Update soon. This is one story I read as soon as I see the update and then think about it even after I have finished the chapter.
3celtic mommyAt the rate Edward is growing a conscience, this story is going to be a few hundred chapters long. I just have no words for his asshattery.
Emmett's reaction to everything seems very in line with his 'character'. Edward may thinks he's being girly, but I like that he has some compassion in him and has been affected by the accident even though he wasn't involved.
Update soon. This is one story I read as soon as I see the update and then think about it even after I have finished the chapter.
11/29/2009 c14 shaheera
plz update cant wait 2 see wat happens in school
plz update cant wait 2 see wat happens in school
11/27/2009 c14 InfallibleSerendipity
Hey,
This story is really good...it made me think and my eyes were watering...It's written exceptionally well (minus the occassional grammar/commonly misused word mistakes, but they dont' really show up enough to detract from the meaning and the impact of your writing) :]
I love your character development with Edward...I mean, fluff from the start is boring after a while, and fluff too fast is too. :] I like it when authors drag on scenes and the player Edward for as long as possible-makes the scene where they finally declare their love all the better.
Haha and good job with the goose name, :] I haven't seen that EVER. :D And I've read too many fanfics to count. Haha.
I'll definitely be keeping up with this story so update soon! 3 Thanks for writing,
Michelle
Hey,
This story is really good...it made me think and my eyes were watering...It's written exceptionally well (minus the occassional grammar/commonly misused word mistakes, but they dont' really show up enough to detract from the meaning and the impact of your writing) :]
I love your character development with Edward...I mean, fluff from the start is boring after a while, and fluff too fast is too. :] I like it when authors drag on scenes and the player Edward for as long as possible-makes the scene where they finally declare their love all the better.
Haha and good job with the goose name, :] I haven't seen that EVER. :D And I've read too many fanfics to count. Haha.
I'll definitely be keeping up with this story so update soon! 3 Thanks for writing,
Michelle
11/27/2009 c13 Josefine
I'm loving this story! I'm so looking forward to next edward pov
I'm loving this story! I'm so looking forward to next edward pov