for Hit By Destiny11/25/2009 c14 starlight90
It is so unfortunate for Bella to be so alone and feel so unloved
She should have someone who she can talk to
Esme could be a little bit more pushy I am sure Bella would have opened up eventually
She just needs to know that someone does give a damn about her.
update soon
It is so unfortunate for Bella to be so alone and feel so unloved
She should have someone who she can talk to
Esme could be a little bit more pushy I am sure Bella would have opened up eventually
She just needs to know that someone does give a damn about her.
update soon
11/25/2009 c14 ChrisRW
Over all a good chapter. I only spotted a couple of minor typos. Just so that you know, in the US one can drop out school at age 16 without parental involvement. If the parent approves it, then you can drop out as early as 15 (my step sister did that). Also, I have worked in a psychiatric ward in a hospital. Bella is openly talking about suicide. It is standard/routine to "Baker Act" (the legal term) such an individual. That means they would be held against their will for psychiatric evaluation for 72 hours. If found to be a danger to others or themselves, then they would be comitted. They would be a patient until they were deemed safe. Since she is openly talking about suicide, she would definitely be committed and started on treatment...whether she OR her family agreed to it.
I realize it is fiction, so creative license should be allowed, just wanted to let you know how the US legal/health system works. I think you are doing a marvelous job considering English isn't your first language.
Over all a good chapter. I only spotted a couple of minor typos. Just so that you know, in the US one can drop out school at age 16 without parental involvement. If the parent approves it, then you can drop out as early as 15 (my step sister did that). Also, I have worked in a psychiatric ward in a hospital. Bella is openly talking about suicide. It is standard/routine to "Baker Act" (the legal term) such an individual. That means they would be held against their will for psychiatric evaluation for 72 hours. If found to be a danger to others or themselves, then they would be comitted. They would be a patient until they were deemed safe. Since she is openly talking about suicide, she would definitely be committed and started on treatment...whether she OR her family agreed to it.
I realize it is fiction, so creative license should be allowed, just wanted to let you know how the US legal/health system works. I think you are doing a marvelous job considering English isn't your first language.
11/25/2009 c14 KaitlinM17
I can't wait till you UD
This is one of my fav. stories i've read so far.
So...UD soon?
haha. xP
I can't wait till you UD
This is one of my fav. stories i've read so far.
So...UD soon?
haha. xP
11/25/2009 c14 ballachicki
Good job can't wait to see what happens next chapter...
Good job can't wait to see what happens next chapter...
11/25/2009 c14 
15ooza
Thanks for getting through the hospital part as quickly as possible! It's hard to wait for more B & E interaction, even if he is being an ass. :) And I think your English is great, I had no idea by reading it that it wasn't your first language.
15oozaThanks for getting through the hospital part as quickly as possible! It's hard to wait for more B & E interaction, even if he is being an ass. :) And I think your English is great, I had no idea by reading it that it wasn't your first language.
11/25/2009 c14 acw1
good chapter. Too bad she couldn't get past who esme was and see her as a potential friend and ally in her life. look forward to more.
good chapter. Too bad she couldn't get past who esme was and see her as a potential friend and ally in her life. look forward to more.
11/25/2009 c14 justjanice01
Thanks for the chapter! : D Look forward to reading more of the story. Enjoying it...
Thanks for the chapter! : D Look forward to reading more of the story. Enjoying it...
11/25/2009 c14 3Cheyanne Cullen
You continue to amaze me! I love your story! It is so intense...even this filler chapter contiues with the intensity! AND I read it listening to the New Moon soundtrack...the meadow song...Oh wow! :) Keep it up! I can't wait for more!
3Cheyanne CullenYou continue to amaze me! I love your story! It is so intense...even this filler chapter contiues with the intensity! AND I read it listening to the New Moon soundtrack...the meadow song...Oh wow! :) Keep it up! I can't wait for more!
11/25/2009 c14 mjwpg
Gah if I were her I would just want to scream, it's funny how everyone thinks they know things but never bother to really ask, they just assume everything and everyone at school is alright and that something happened months ago they all assume it's her...
Hopefully she gets some shots in with her crutches at school, lol.
I can't wait to find out what her crazy mother and Billy did, I'm thinking they performed that ritual, but why doesn't anyone know about it, why do they think it's Bella's fault?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Gah if I were her I would just want to scream, it's funny how everyone thinks they know things but never bother to really ask, they just assume everything and everyone at school is alright and that something happened months ago they all assume it's her...
Hopefully she gets some shots in with her crutches at school, lol.
I can't wait to find out what her crazy mother and Billy did, I'm thinking they performed that ritual, but why doesn't anyone know about it, why do they think it's Bella's fault?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
11/25/2009 c14 Archerywoman
loved it but now i cant wait for the next chapter in edwards pov. and see whats going on at school.
loved it but now i cant wait for the next chapter in edwards pov. and see whats going on at school.
11/25/2009 c14 mauralee
Really liked her conversation with Carlisle. Hoping he doesn't stop pushing her to get help.
Slightly disgusted with Charlie...have one of your friends bring you home? Really. That's nice.
His behavior makes it very easy to understand why Bella is a bitter person.
The chapter may have been filler, but hey, filler is necessary. Without filler what would an Oreo be? Or an eclair? Or a taco? Filler is good.
Really liked her conversation with Carlisle. Hoping he doesn't stop pushing her to get help.
Slightly disgusted with Charlie...have one of your friends bring you home? Really. That's nice.
His behavior makes it very easy to understand why Bella is a bitter person.
The chapter may have been filler, but hey, filler is necessary. Without filler what would an Oreo be? Or an eclair? Or a taco? Filler is good.
11/25/2009 c14 hooker81
I fill so bad for Bella :(
It makes me want to cry, she has
no one. Her Mom and Jacob put her through hell, then her dad makes her keep quite. Then Edward and ever other kid in school makes fun of her everyday. Heck I would want to "off" my self too!
I fill so bad for Bella :(
It makes me want to cry, she has
no one. Her Mom and Jacob put her through hell, then her dad makes her keep quite. Then Edward and ever other kid in school makes fun of her everyday. Heck I would want to "off" my self too!
11/25/2009 c14 ParfaitCherie
Love, love, love your story! Can't wait to see how it's going to turn out!
Love, love, love your story! Can't wait to see how it's going to turn out!