for Hit By Destiny11/16/2009 c13 Caitie126
Wow, you sure have made Doucheward a character I can honestly hate in this fic! I'm really curious to see where you go from here with him POV! Update again soon please!
Wow, you sure have made Doucheward a character I can honestly hate in this fic! I'm really curious to see where you go from here with him POV! Update again soon please!
11/16/2009 c13 
3Viridis73
gods, I'm not certain what I think. The story gives me a claustrophobic feeling. Urg, Edward is very freakin' cold. Nearly sociopathic, bit of a narcasist. Renee is clearly psychopathic and way over the edge of narcasism. Charlie is blind. Esme & Carlisle seem human, as well as R, A & Em.
Mind you, I'm not flaming you. It's well written and I do believe that the above is the intent. I so get why Bella is feeling without hope. Looking forward to seeing Edward crack and Renee getting her due.
3Viridis73gods, I'm not certain what I think. The story gives me a claustrophobic feeling. Urg, Edward is very freakin' cold. Nearly sociopathic, bit of a narcasist. Renee is clearly psychopathic and way over the edge of narcasism. Charlie is blind. Esme & Carlisle seem human, as well as R, A & Em.
Mind you, I'm not flaming you. It's well written and I do believe that the above is the intent. I so get why Bella is feeling without hope. Looking forward to seeing Edward crack and Renee getting her due.
11/15/2009 c13 lotusblomsten
Awsome chapter, specially the lenght:), would have been super with an EPOV next chapter to
Awsome chapter, specially the lenght:), would have been super with an EPOV next chapter to
11/15/2009 c13 luvinJazz
I really like this story. This chapt really gave more insight into Edward, he's an ASS! Have a hard time seeing how you're going to turn this into an E/B romance. Towards the end of the chapt started to see Edward starting to regret his actions, feel guilt, which made him a little more likable. But a romance just doesn't seem realistic considering his opionion of her. Not one bit of attraction, he held her in total distain, and not for any hidden reason just because he honestly thought she was a waste of space and a joke. He didn't find her even remotely likable or attractive. Plz update soon, can't wait to see where this story goes.
I really like this story. This chapt really gave more insight into Edward, he's an ASS! Have a hard time seeing how you're going to turn this into an E/B romance. Towards the end of the chapt started to see Edward starting to regret his actions, feel guilt, which made him a little more likable. But a romance just doesn't seem realistic considering his opionion of her. Not one bit of attraction, he held her in total distain, and not for any hidden reason just because he honestly thought she was a waste of space and a joke. He didn't find her even remotely likable or attractive. Plz update soon, can't wait to see where this story goes.
11/15/2009 c13 berdb
Edward is an asshole through and through. Unfortunately, it takes a life or death incident for him to even attempt to self-reflect even the tiniest bit. If this had not happened and if nothing like this would ever happen, he would never change.
So, I don't consider this a real change if a person only changes due to the fact that people expect a change or remorse.
He is only worried about how others view him, and how this will impact his life.
HE IS THE WASTE OF SPACE
Edward is an asshole through and through. Unfortunately, it takes a life or death incident for him to even attempt to self-reflect even the tiniest bit. If this had not happened and if nothing like this would ever happen, he would never change.
So, I don't consider this a real change if a person only changes due to the fact that people expect a change or remorse.
He is only worried about how others view him, and how this will impact his life.
HE IS THE WASTE OF SPACE
11/15/2009 c13 1Olympic1340
That was an amazing chapter. It didn't feel long to me at all, in fact, I couldn't have stopped reading if I had wanted to. You did an excellent job of making me apalled by Edwards attitude and behavior, and just starting to feel a little bad for him because you know he is begining to feel things he has been blocking out. I have to say that I really felt bad for Carlisle, Esme, and Emmett in this chapter, realizing just how uncaring Edward is. They can't even comprehend it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
1Olympic1340That was an amazing chapter. It didn't feel long to me at all, in fact, I couldn't have stopped reading if I had wanted to. You did an excellent job of making me apalled by Edwards attitude and behavior, and just starting to feel a little bad for him because you know he is begining to feel things he has been blocking out. I have to say that I really felt bad for Carlisle, Esme, and Emmett in this chapter, realizing just how uncaring Edward is. They can't even comprehend it. I can't wait for the next chapter.
11/15/2009 c13 mo leath eile
Love the story but hate Edward in the chapter. What cold hearted person would leave and get drunk?
Love the story but hate Edward in the chapter. What cold hearted person would leave and get drunk?
11/15/2009 c13 1Night Orchid
I think the way you wrote this chapter fit the emotions running through Edward right now..he IS all over the place, so it worked perfectly, you got into his hesd!
1Night OrchidI think the way you wrote this chapter fit the emotions running through Edward right now..he IS all over the place, so it worked perfectly, you got into his hesd!
11/15/2009 c13 Archerywoman
very good i liked it. when i read bellas pov about her sueing edwad i was like no no dont do it. but now after hearing his pov and now understanding how far his head is stuck up his own ass and several girls i would tell her to sue his ass for all hes worth and makes sure to take his precious volvo away. i mean i know this is a edward and bella story but that was seriously messed up so no end. dont get me wrong it was awsome and great but someone needs to bet his ass and bet his ass good. but otherwise love the story and the only way i could seeing it get better is if edward had to do everything for her during school since he practicaly crippled her.
very good i liked it. when i read bellas pov about her sueing edwad i was like no no dont do it. but now after hearing his pov and now understanding how far his head is stuck up his own ass and several girls i would tell her to sue his ass for all hes worth and makes sure to take his precious volvo away. i mean i know this is a edward and bella story but that was seriously messed up so no end. dont get me wrong it was awsome and great but someone needs to bet his ass and bet his ass good. but otherwise love the story and the only way i could seeing it get better is if edward had to do everything for her during school since he practicaly crippled her.
11/15/2009 c13 mjwpg
m, okay you might want to rewind and have Bella run his ass over, I hope this Edward has some redeeming qualities because right now I'm not so sure.
m, okay you might want to rewind and have Bella run his ass over, I hope this Edward has some redeeming qualities because right now I'm not so sure.
11/15/2009 c13 hooker81
My god Edward is a fucking asshole. Scratch that he is a giant Fucking asshole.
My god Edward is a fucking asshole. Scratch that he is a giant Fucking asshole.