11/10/2009 c11 Im Poiosned
This is one Awesome story! :D so update soon lool

11/9/2009 c11 SP
I love this story! I like the direction its taking and I can't wait for more chapters to come! I hope there will be more soon!

11/9/2009 c11 15ooza
I love your story, I even love asshole Edward. Can't wait to find out more about the night with Bella, Renee and (?)...

11/9/2009 c11 Rosaa
wow...

I don´t even know what to write, i'm just sitting here with my moth open in chock. Edwards pov was much more raw and i almost got chocked when I read the part where he hits her even thou I know its going to happen.

update soon! :)

11/9/2009 c11 Cabana123
This is the only "all human" story I have read that I actually like!

I just wish all you fanfic writers didn't have to sleep/eat or go to work/school so I didn't have to wait for updates.

When I get rich I'm hiring you all to work as my personal story tellers - 24/7.

11/8/2009 c11 sballLuvr5
ok so i have to be up in five hours to take an exam i have yet to study for all because i was hooked on this story. it's going to be a long night. really great story even though i want to punch edward in his beautiful face and i feel so bad for bella. and i'm dying to know the whole story between her and her mom, jacob and billy even though i think i know what happened. anyway, amazing story, update soon. and by soon i mean now! please?

Kristi

11/8/2009 c11 luvinJazz
He says, "I just hit a goose" What an ass. really think you're making his character unredeemable. Can't wait to see how you try to fix that. Plz update soon.

11/8/2009 c10 luvinJazz
i really like this story, very interesting. Have no idea how you'll be able to turn it into a B/E romance though because he is absolutely horrible to her.