for Hit By Destiny11/8/2009 c4 luvinJazz
Poor Bella, anxious to see what happened to her. Edward is really an ass. Not liking his character at all.
Poor Bella, anxious to see what happened to her. Edward is really an ass. Not liking his character at all.
11/8/2009 c11 MJ
i like the story i just feel bad for bella, edward calling her a goose so he obviously finds her ugly and uattractive along with EVERYONE else i just idk hes supposed to fall in love with her! i just feel bad for bella where is her prince on the white horse? instead she gets stuck with a manwhore with no decent manners i just dont see a happily ever after for bella hes a total douche so hes going to fall in love with her and what be blinded by love? isnt anyone going to find bella hot and sexy? bella deserves some happieness and ego boost lifting after that renee crap, she goes through that trauma and then gets stuck with a manslut who used to tease her and use to threaten violence with her? honestly she gets stuck with a guy thats not afraid to use violence on women? and gets into death threats over dirty pants! hes an asshole! i love this bella, and she deserves beter! a relationship wih no lust? thats just terrifying, and doomed to failure, or what hes all of a sudden going to find her hot a sexy? please! obviosly shes not a pretty girl, if everyone calls her ugly duckling, so she was cursed with an evil gorgeous mom and with got stuck with charlies looks? cause crap not even mike newton wants to tap that! and dang bella is a freakin virgin waiting for true love? and she gets stuck a guy that sticked his clamydia dick in anything with boobs, that used to tease her, hahaha im just saying cant she ever catch a break! just imagine the future, jeez bellas already insecure now shes with a guy that experienced ALOT of girls, they can all have a slumber party and discuss edwards penis, or edwards side, he broke many girls hearts and instead of karma kicking his ass he gets a virgin that will only ever experience his dick and that will love him devotivally, wow edwards one lucky guy, aw i bet his pet name for her will not be dear, honey, love but will be goose right, he wont lose that right? oh but this is different right their not having sex like all of his other girls their "making love" cue the violens i know im being repetitive through out this whole review but daamn, i just wish edward ends up with one of his sluts or at least works his ASS off for bella, blood sweat and tears. and even then i'll still prbly be bitter. LOL i know it doesnt seem like it but i do like your story i just HATE your edward, with obviosly a passion.
i like the story i just feel bad for bella, edward calling her a goose so he obviously finds her ugly and uattractive along with EVERYONE else i just idk hes supposed to fall in love with her! i just feel bad for bella where is her prince on the white horse? instead she gets stuck with a manwhore with no decent manners i just dont see a happily ever after for bella hes a total douche so hes going to fall in love with her and what be blinded by love? isnt anyone going to find bella hot and sexy? bella deserves some happieness and ego boost lifting after that renee crap, she goes through that trauma and then gets stuck with a manslut who used to tease her and use to threaten violence with her? honestly she gets stuck with a guy thats not afraid to use violence on women? and gets into death threats over dirty pants! hes an asshole! i love this bella, and she deserves beter! a relationship wih no lust? thats just terrifying, and doomed to failure, or what hes all of a sudden going to find her hot a sexy? please! obviosly shes not a pretty girl, if everyone calls her ugly duckling, so she was cursed with an evil gorgeous mom and with got stuck with charlies looks? cause crap not even mike newton wants to tap that! and dang bella is a freakin virgin waiting for true love? and she gets stuck a guy that sticked his clamydia dick in anything with boobs, that used to tease her, hahaha im just saying cant she ever catch a break! just imagine the future, jeez bellas already insecure now shes with a guy that experienced ALOT of girls, they can all have a slumber party and discuss edwards penis, or edwards side, he broke many girls hearts and instead of karma kicking his ass he gets a virgin that will only ever experience his dick and that will love him devotivally, wow edwards one lucky guy, aw i bet his pet name for her will not be dear, honey, love but will be goose right, he wont lose that right? oh but this is different right their not having sex like all of his other girls their "making love" cue the violens i know im being repetitive through out this whole review but daamn, i just wish edward ends up with one of his sluts or at least works his ASS off for bella, blood sweat and tears. and even then i'll still prbly be bitter. LOL i know it doesnt seem like it but i do like your story i just HATE your edward, with obviosly a passion.
11/8/2009 c11 starlight90
This story is really good. I can't wait for you to update
I have a reasonable assumption on what happened to Bella with her MOM
I am awaiting the next few chapters to see if my deductions are correct.
I just don't understand why her Dad could be so thoughtless about his only Daughter
He treats her more like a live in maid. If I was him and my wife did something to my Daughter I certainly would not be acting like he is.
And why would they let her mother out if she was that delusional. I don't get it?
This story is really good. I can't wait for you to update
I have a reasonable assumption on what happened to Bella with her MOM
I am awaiting the next few chapters to see if my deductions are correct.
I just don't understand why her Dad could be so thoughtless about his only Daughter
He treats her more like a live in maid. If I was him and my wife did something to my Daughter I certainly would not be acting like he is.
And why would they let her mother out if she was that delusional. I don't get it?
11/8/2009 c11 Kansas Cullen
Please update soon! I am anxious to see if Dr Cullen knows about the incident and how Charlie and Renee react.
Please update soon! I am anxious to see if Dr Cullen knows about the incident and how Charlie and Renee react.
11/8/2009 c11 Twilightobseser
OMG OMG OMG Post ASAP! I wonder what Bella will be thinking and OMG OMG!
OMG OMG OMG Post ASAP! I wonder what Bella will be thinking and OMG OMG!
11/8/2009 c11 ChrisRW
Now that we are up to the accident, I must admit to being curious how in the world will these two come together. Heck, I can see Bella being disappointed in Edward that he didn't make good on his "promise". Again, thanks for the quick update.
Now that we are up to the accident, I must admit to being curious how in the world will these two come together. Heck, I can see Bella being disappointed in Edward that he didn't make good on his "promise". Again, thanks for the quick update.
11/8/2009 c11 
1Squishfie
holy shhit...she'll be pissed off when she wakes up because well...woke up...daamn
1Squishfieholy shhit...she'll be pissed off when she wakes up because well...woke up...daamn
11/8/2009 c11 berdb
He's still a horrible person. He is still only worried about what will happen to him and how this day has been bad for him and how his future will be affected. He still is calling her Goose.
His parents are absenty parents. "Just give the kids credit cards and everything they want and let them learn from their mistakes, no matter who they affect around them".
& then when something bad happens, they all cry, & the parents bail him out.
Bad parenting.
He's still a horrible person. He is still only worried about what will happen to him and how this day has been bad for him and how his future will be affected. He still is calling her Goose.
His parents are absenty parents. "Just give the kids credit cards and everything they want and let them learn from their mistakes, no matter who they affect around them".
& then when something bad happens, they all cry, & the parents bail him out.
Bad parenting.
11/8/2009 c11 3apocalyps24
peronaly i would have liked bella to be dead... that sound so wrong... but anyway it would have made the story so much more interesting
more soon please
3apocalyps24peronaly i would have liked bella to be dead... that sound so wrong... but anyway it would have made the story so much more interesting
more soon please