for Hit By Destiny11/10/2009 c12 Abby
well no but It was certainly BETTER for BELLA to be dead right ?
he doesn't question her " old " scars ? why ?
It was about time that people are getting hard with Edward & his way of being
& about her leg - you can always let her walk like Dr. House :D ( poor girl ) :(
well no but It was certainly BETTER for BELLA to be dead right ?
he doesn't question her " old " scars ? why ?
It was about time that people are getting hard with Edward & his way of being
& about her leg - you can always let her walk like Dr. House :D ( poor girl ) :(
11/10/2009 c12 justjanice01
Enjoying this! Can't get enough. Love the story, different from other ff's.
Enjoying this! Can't get enough. Love the story, different from other ff's.
11/10/2009 c12 Twilightobseser
poor Bella. She showed her crazy mom. i feel bad for Edward for being yelled at. well post soon!
poor Bella. She showed her crazy mom. i feel bad for Edward for being yelled at. well post soon!
11/10/2009 c12 21Snapdragons
Well, I'm glad that Bella didn't die I will say that. But Carlisle should have let Edward explain himself at the hospital. Oh well, I'm done...
Rhonda :)
Well, I'm glad that Bella didn't die I will say that. But Carlisle should have let Edward explain himself at the hospital. Oh well, I'm done...
Rhonda :)
11/10/2009 c12 ChrisRW
Glad Charlie took Renee out. I was ready to slap her, lol. Poor thing. Now she has even MORE crap to deal with. I'm guessing that Edward, maybe Alice, will be her only visitors. I would suggest that if you do an EPOV next that you don't end it the same place as the BPOV. Perhaps summerize more where there is overlap then continue with new material. Just a suggestion. Thanks so much for the update.
Glad Charlie took Renee out. I was ready to slap her, lol. Poor thing. Now she has even MORE crap to deal with. I'm guessing that Edward, maybe Alice, will be her only visitors. I would suggest that if you do an EPOV next that you don't end it the same place as the BPOV. Perhaps summerize more where there is overlap then continue with new material. Just a suggestion. Thanks so much for the update.
11/10/2009 c12 PLEASE DELETE1
I agree she shouldn't have died... because that wouldn't really allow for a story... but I think her injuries weren't severe enough. Mild concussion? No internal bleeding? No punctured lung (from the ribs)? I think that, considering how you described the crash (you know, with the feeling the bump and whatnot), she would probably have received some internal injuries. But whatever. Are you going to do every chapter from two perspectives? That was a little tedious to read up 'till this point.
I agree she shouldn't have died... because that wouldn't really allow for a story... but I think her injuries weren't severe enough. Mild concussion? No internal bleeding? No punctured lung (from the ribs)? I think that, considering how you described the crash (you know, with the feeling the bump and whatnot), she would probably have received some internal injuries. But whatever. Are you going to do every chapter from two perspectives? That was a little tedious to read up 'till this point.
11/9/2009 c11 hiphopanonymous
UPDATE SON! LIKE NOW! I LOVE THISE STORY! OMG!
UPDATE SON! LIKE NOW! I LOVE THISE STORY! OMG!
11/9/2009 c11 SP
I love this story! I like the direction its taking and I can't wait for more chapters to come! I hope there will be more soon!
I love this story! I like the direction its taking and I can't wait for more chapters to come! I hope there will be more soon!
11/9/2009 c11 
15ooza
I love your story, I even love asshole Edward. Can't wait to find out more about the night with Bella, Renee and (?)...
15oozaI love your story, I even love asshole Edward. Can't wait to find out more about the night with Bella, Renee and (?)...
11/9/2009 c11 shaheera
this chapter was better than the last one
this story is getting more and more intresting day by day
i cant wait 4 da next update
nd i love u 4 updating every day even if its not enough 4 me
this chapter was better than the last one
this story is getting more and more intresting day by day
i cant wait 4 da next update
nd i love u 4 updating every day even if its not enough 4 me
11/9/2009 c11 Rosaa
wow...
I don´t even know what to write, i'm just sitting here with my moth open in chock. Edwards pov was much more raw and i almost got chocked when I read the part where he hits her even thou I know its going to happen.
update soon! :)
wow...
I don´t even know what to write, i'm just sitting here with my moth open in chock. Edwards pov was much more raw and i almost got chocked when I read the part where he hits her even thou I know its going to happen.
update soon! :)