11/6/2009 c9 Abby
Edward it such a jerk !
poor Bella :( almost hope she dies but then there won't be a story
:)
Edward it such a jerk !
poor Bella :( almost hope she dies but then there won't be a story
:)
11/6/2009 c9 Guest
Great job so far, keep it up.
Great job so far, keep it up.
11/6/2009 c9 ChrisRW
Right now, Edward is such a manwhore/skank. Curious to see how the accident will change that. Also, will Alice get her wish? Will Bella dump him? Thanks for the quick updates!
Right now, Edward is such a manwhore/skank. Curious to see how the accident will change that. Also, will Alice get her wish? Will Bella dump him? Thanks for the quick updates!
11/5/2009 c9 Wicked Rose Red
I love how proud you've made Edward of his own driving skills, with ZERO sympathy or tolerance for others' mistakes. Yup, that's amusing!
Looking forward to your next chapter.
I love how proud you've made Edward of his own driving skills, with ZERO sympathy or tolerance for others' mistakes. Yup, that's amusing!
Looking forward to your next chapter.
11/5/2009 c9 KillerChaos
Can't wait for the next chapter. Would like to see Bella becoming a stronger character though. You're right about Edward being a total dick. Can't help but love him. Onto chapter 10! Woohoo
Can't wait for the next chapter. Would like to see Bella becoming a stronger character though. You're right about Edward being a total dick. Can't help but love him. Onto chapter 10! Woohoo
11/5/2009 c9 Twilightobseser
FINALLY! The accident! can't wait good chapter
FINALLY! The accident! can't wait good chapter
11/5/2009 c9 2Ethin
holy crap, i haven't read a good story in forever! Thank god for your imagination! I hope to read more in the, very, very, very EARLY future. ;D Oh, question.
Are you going to add Bella incident in all the way anytime soon, or are you just going to keep hinting out?
~Ethin
holy crap, i haven't read a good story in forever! Thank god for your imagination! I hope to read more in the, very, very, very EARLY future. ;D Oh, question.
Are you going to add Bella incident in all the way anytime soon, or are you just going to keep hinting out?
~Ethin
11/5/2009 c9 Laney Tate
Great story! Please update soon!
Great story! Please update soon!
11/5/2009 c3 Kmserenity
I like 'fuck' to in all its various incarnations as well (fuckery being a favorite, personally), but im assuming the kid doesnt have tourrettes. for fucks sake, give me a fucking break with the 'fuck' (maybe a little restraint is good). anywhoo... like the premise. E is clearly a douche, but i like the internal struggle. looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thx!
I like 'fuck' to in all its various incarnations as well (fuckery being a favorite, personally), but im assuming the kid doesnt have tourrettes. for fucks sake, give me a fucking break with the 'fuck' (maybe a little restraint is good). anywhoo... like the premise. E is clearly a douche, but i like the internal struggle. looking forward to seeing where you take this. Thx!
11/5/2009 c9 AkashaLuna
AH you cant end it there !
AH you cant end it there !
11/5/2009 c9 asimpledesign
i no it is rude of me to say this but i hope edward suffers cause... augh... he is such an asshole. I know im goin cry reading the nxt chapter!:( update soon please!
i no it is rude of me to say this but i hope edward suffers cause... augh... he is such an asshole. I know im goin cry reading the nxt chapter!:( update soon please!
11/5/2009 c9 beans and cornbread
Can he be anymore of a jerk? I don't care how good a man looks are there women out there that will really allow themselves to be treated like that?
Can he be anymore of a jerk? I don't care how good a man looks are there women out there that will really allow themselves to be treated like that?