for Hit By Destiny10/26/2009 c5 krazzy hopeless romantic
i just found out this story and this 5 chapters are very good...
i can't wait to see what happens next
i just found out this story and this 5 chapters are very good...
i can't wait to see what happens next
10/26/2009 c5 ScrapNSign
Edward's hatred for Tuesdays are making me a little nervous for tomorrow...good chap.
Edward's hatred for Tuesdays are making me a little nervous for tomorrow...good chap.
10/26/2009 c5 
5KittyPimms
It's not the clicking that's difficult, it's coming up with something remotely intellegent to say. So, I agree with Edward about Tuesdays. Not even very good tv shows are on.
5KittyPimmsIt's not the clicking that's difficult, it's coming up with something remotely intellegent to say. So, I agree with Edward about Tuesdays. Not even very good tv shows are on.
10/26/2009 c4 irishchristina007
i love this please put something up soon cant wait to see what happens
i love this please put something up soon cant wait to see what happens
10/25/2009 c4 bripearl
Please update, I really like what you've been posting.
Please update, I really like what you've been posting.
10/25/2009 c4 1zemmeline
Oh my goodness! That was her mom, wasn't it? I LOVE where this is going! You're doing great! Can't wait for the next update!
-Lola
1zemmelineOh my goodness! That was her mom, wasn't it? I LOVE where this is going! You're doing great! Can't wait for the next update!
-Lola
10/25/2009 c4 BelovedNarcissist312
I like your story so far... Kinda curious how Edward reacted to the "Please do". can't wait for updates
I like your story so far... Kinda curious how Edward reacted to the "Please do". can't wait for updates
10/25/2009 c4 2Roxyrae
Wow I really like your story! I really like how you are establishing the characters along with leaving mystery out there. I just have one concern, will each other chapter be a repeat but in Edward's POV? I noticed that it was kind of like that for chapter 2 but that could have been an introduction. I don't know about other readers but I find if it is done that way that the sotry becomes slow and not as enjoyable as we would be waiting to see what happens next and to have to wait longer wouldn't be too good (I usually skip repeated chapters from POV's). Other then that I really like your writing style, your grammar and spelling is good and the characters seem real. Keep up the great work, update soon!
2RoxyraeWow I really like your story! I really like how you are establishing the characters along with leaving mystery out there. I just have one concern, will each other chapter be a repeat but in Edward's POV? I noticed that it was kind of like that for chapter 2 but that could have been an introduction. I don't know about other readers but I find if it is done that way that the sotry becomes slow and not as enjoyable as we would be waiting to see what happens next and to have to wait longer wouldn't be too good (I usually skip repeated chapters from POV's). Other then that I really like your writing style, your grammar and spelling is good and the characters seem real. Keep up the great work, update soon!
10/25/2009 c4 2CaitlinC
I like it so far :] i feel so bad for Bella, that is something that nobody should have to go through! keep it up!
2CaitlinCI like it so far :] i feel so bad for Bella, that is something that nobody should have to go through! keep it up!
10/25/2009 c4 1Twilight-Isabella-Always-Yours
I feel bad for bella her life must suck...Good chapter, but also sad..
please update soon..
1Twilight-Isabella-Always-YoursI feel bad for bella her life must suck...Good chapter, but also sad..
please update soon..
10/25/2009 c4 21Snapdragons
I feel so sorry for Bella. I can't believe parents would treat their child like that. I can't wait to see how this all unfolds.
Rhonda :)
I feel so sorry for Bella. I can't believe parents would treat their child like that. I can't wait to see how this all unfolds.
Rhonda :)
10/24/2009 c3 21Snapdragons
wow, this edward is really an ass and really full of himself. I hope Bella will be able to change that.
Rhonda :)
wow, this edward is really an ass and really full of himself. I hope Bella will be able to change that.
Rhonda :)
10/24/2009 c2 3celtic mommy
Good start. I'm loving this dark Bella. Curious as to what happened (so you did a good job at pulling in the reader). Definitely ready to read more.
3celtic mommyGood start. I'm loving this dark Bella. Curious as to what happened (so you did a good job at pulling in the reader). Definitely ready to read more.