3/16/2020 c21 ivebeenwaiting
it’s been ten years
i’m still waiting for the update
please just please finish the story dear lord
it’s been ten years
i’m still waiting for the update
please just please finish the story dear lord
6/20/2014 c21 1archerzhang
Really great story, and though this is really cliche and I hate most cliches, it's awesome! I appreciate you, and all other authors, who took actual time in crafting OC's for BBxRae's and Cybee and Robstar's children. Thank you for not "stealing" other OC names and such. And your battle scenes are really great since they're better than whatever I've got, so don't sweat it! Having Malchior and Terra as the villains is great, since everyone always does Terra and forgets Malchior. :( Kudos to you for taking advantage of an opportunity everyone seemed to overlook! :) Please update soon, just looking at how long ago this was updated makes me wince, and want to cry since this is a really great story. Pleas update, pretty please!
Really great story, and though this is really cliche and I hate most cliches, it's awesome! I appreciate you, and all other authors, who took actual time in crafting OC's for BBxRae's and Cybee and Robstar's children. Thank you for not "stealing" other OC names and such. And your battle scenes are really great since they're better than whatever I've got, so don't sweat it! Having Malchior and Terra as the villains is great, since everyone always does Terra and forgets Malchior. :( Kudos to you for taking advantage of an opportunity everyone seemed to overlook! :) Please update soon, just looking at how long ago this was updated makes me wince, and want to cry since this is a really great story. Pleas update, pretty please!
1/8/2011 c21 Knock-Out92
I so think this is an awesome story, I hae really enjoyed reading, and looking forward to more chapters!
I so think this is an awesome story, I hae really enjoyed reading, and looking forward to more chapters!
11/20/2010 c4 Bob
This story has issues.
The writing is a bit lack luster, especially the diologue. You may want to get a beta for tht.
Your main problem with this story is that you are going against the laws and logic that the show had. When Starfire went to the Future, she wasn't there in the future because she time traveled. If Raven and Beastboy traveled, they wouldn't meet their future selfs since their future selfs DIDN'T exist.
This story has issues.
The writing is a bit lack luster, especially the diologue. You may want to get a beta for tht.
Your main problem with this story is that you are going against the laws and logic that the show had. When Starfire went to the Future, she wasn't there in the future because she time traveled. If Raven and Beastboy traveled, they wouldn't meet their future selfs since their future selfs DIDN'T exist.
11/20/2010 c20 bk00
Love this! So cool! I was like "HOW THE HECK DID ROBIN dissappear!" And then it was Cheshire! I hope you kept her with Speedy and Kid Flash with Jinx! Amazing chapter as always!
Love this! So cool! I was like "HOW THE HECK DID ROBIN dissappear!" And then it was Cheshire! I hope you kept her with Speedy and Kid Flash with Jinx! Amazing chapter as always!
11/20/2010 c17 bk00
I am so behind! OMG that was so cute! What a wonderful way to play out their first kiss!
I am so behind! OMG that was so cute! What a wonderful way to play out their first kiss!
10/15/2010 c20 Negative
:D When is the next chappy coming?~
:D When is the next chappy coming?~
9/11/2010 c4 2IRapeLlamas
i seriously love the idea - the couple is so cute !
im just a bit confused...
garfield and rachel? is beast boy's real name garfield or something?
i seriously love the idea - the couple is so cute !
im just a bit confused...
garfield and rachel? is beast boy's real name garfield or something?
9/11/2010 c19 NCISLOVER
love it :) can't wait for more
i love
"What are you smiling about, Ms. Raven?" She smirked when the other blushed and ducked her head.
it was so funny :)
love it :) can't wait for more
i love
"What are you smiling about, Ms. Raven?" She smirked when the other blushed and ducked her head.
it was so funny :)