for Dark Games & Twisted Minds11/11/2009 c3 Karandash86
Oh Kate, youre killing me here! Are you seriously going to end every chapter with that kind of suspense? If so, omg I love you. by the way, you need to update this more than 1x per week! love it so far.
that scene with nicole was just amazing. james is EVIL.
update!
Oh Kate, youre killing me here! Are you seriously going to end every chapter with that kind of suspense? If so, omg I love you. by the way, you need to update this more than 1x per week! love it so far.
that scene with nicole was just amazing. james is EVIL.
update!
11/11/2009 c3 TexasTwilight77
I'm so confused, but in a good way. You have me literally begging for more. I can't wait to see what connection they have and what had happened to them in the past. Please update soon~;)
I'm so confused, but in a good way. You have me literally begging for more. I can't wait to see what connection they have and what had happened to them in the past. Please update soon~;)
11/9/2009 c3 cullengirl1983
Mother Fucker. You are giving me the creeps! Flashback what? What the hell? Why are they fighting? Who is Nicole? WHAT? Yah. This is awesome! Love ti!
Mother Fucker. You are giving me the creeps! Flashback what? What the hell? Why are they fighting? Who is Nicole? WHAT? Yah. This is awesome! Love ti!
11/3/2009 c2 cullengirl1983
This is awesome! I love this. I did not think you'd be writing this kind of story! I think this is going to be really, really good. Maybe a little scary too!
This is awesome! I love this. I did not think you'd be writing this kind of story! I think this is going to be really, really good. Maybe a little scary too!
11/3/2009 c2 Oh my creepy
This is going to be such a great fic... looking forward to next week!
Mia
This is going to be such a great fic... looking forward to next week!
Mia
11/3/2009 c2 Karandash86
O! Really liked this chap! Are you going to leave us hanging like this in every chapter! If so, you are just going to have to update more than 1x per week. I don't know if I can take it lol!
I'm just wondering what the hell is going on! What is the deal with James and Edward? And was that Bella's hair? Agh. Going to kill me.
loved that part when Edward was hunting and he felt bad for the lion cubs. And the whole scene itself it just, wow! He is going to be an awesome good guy in this fic. Yay, more to read!- can you tell I'm excited? haha.
O! Really liked this chap! Are you going to leave us hanging like this in every chapter! If so, you are just going to have to update more than 1x per week. I don't know if I can take it lol!
I'm just wondering what the hell is going on! What is the deal with James and Edward? And was that Bella's hair? Agh. Going to kill me.
loved that part when Edward was hunting and he felt bad for the lion cubs. And the whole scene itself it just, wow! He is going to be an awesome good guy in this fic. Yay, more to read!- can you tell I'm excited? haha.
11/2/2009 c2 TexasTwilight77
Aww...your stories are some of my favorites! This story definietly has a darker feel to it. I'm really intrigued on how James got a lock of Bella's hair. (of course I'm assuming that the package was sent by James and that the hair is from Bella.) Can't wait to read what happens next. ;)
Aww...your stories are some of my favorites! This story definietly has a darker feel to it. I'm really intrigued on how James got a lock of Bella's hair. (of course I'm assuming that the package was sent by James and that the hair is from Bella.) Can't wait to read what happens next. ;)
10/26/2009 c1 pdd912
Nice, dramatic start to the new story. It reminds me a bit of Anne Rice, particularly the first book in her Vampire Series. I know you said my fic was an influence in some way, but to me it stands on its own. Perhaps you just meant in the sentence structure or style? Thanks for the compliment, though. This is a good one. Scary, too.
Until next time,
Pam
Nice, dramatic start to the new story. It reminds me a bit of Anne Rice, particularly the first book in her Vampire Series. I know you said my fic was an influence in some way, but to me it stands on its own. Perhaps you just meant in the sentence structure or style? Thanks for the compliment, though. This is a good one. Scary, too.
Until next time,
Pam
1010/26/2009 c1 cullengirl1983
this is a really interesting idea. i'm looking forward to see where you take it.
this is a really interesting idea. i'm looking forward to see where you take it.
10/25/2009 c1 Karandash86
WOW. Can I say WOW two times? Youre writing is amazing.
Your imagery is just _ no words. I felt like I was there at the campsite! And how James seduced Cynthia into coming with him? WOW three times.
This is gonna be so dark. I can't wait to read this fic. Can't freaking wait. So, difft from A Little Night Music.
WOW. Can I say WOW two times? Youre writing is amazing.
Your imagery is just _ no words. I felt like I was there at the campsite! And how James seduced Cynthia into coming with him? WOW three times.
This is gonna be so dark. I can't wait to read this fic. Can't freaking wait. So, difft from A Little Night Music.
10/25/2009 c1 TexasTwilight77
Hmm...this is interesting. I don't think this has ever been done before. I'm really anxious to find out the connection between Edward and James. I'll be waiting for your update. So far so good. ;)
Hmm...this is interesting. I don't think this has ever been done before. I'm really anxious to find out the connection between Edward and James. I'll be waiting for your update. So far so good. ;)