for Early Morning Murder1/19/2010 c4 MoJoR
I can't get into this... is Beckett unusually aggressive or is it just me? And nothing seems to flow...
I can't get into this... is Beckett unusually aggressive or is it just me? And nothing seems to flow...
1/13/2010 c12 Tsurwolf
Nasty teasing writers, force us to read 11 chapters to find out that it was all a DREAM, very cool i like it.
Enjoyed the story, though don't know if Kate would go off quite that bad at a fellow worker.
The emotional 3 girl crying scene works for me ( considering the circumstances )visual image '3 women blubbering into each other'
Entertaining story well written.
Cheers TBBW
Nasty teasing writers, force us to read 11 chapters to find out that it was all a DREAM, very cool i like it.
Enjoyed the story, though don't know if Kate would go off quite that bad at a fellow worker.
The emotional 3 girl crying scene works for me ( considering the circumstances )visual image '3 women blubbering into each other'
Entertaining story well written.
Cheers TBBW
1/11/2010 c12 
7maysecret
Whoa! Now that is going to happen! I just know it! It's how the show will end! hahaha :D
7maysecretWhoa! Now that is going to happen! I just know it! It's how the show will end! hahaha :D
1/11/2010 c12 4Inscribed-on-my-heart
i am really going to miss this story, Well done!
And i know you aren't feeling the greatest so hope you feel better, and a beautiful ending to a a great story!
4Inscribed-on-my-hearti am really going to miss this story, Well done!
And i know you aren't feeling the greatest so hope you feel better, and a beautiful ending to a a great story!
1/10/2010 c12 11SOUND-Art
I'm thinking of writing a sequel, and it looks like you want me to as well!
I've got a few ideas lined up, so I'll get writing. Thanks for your wonderful support and reviews, everyone's who read this. Thank you. =D
11SOUND-ArtI'm thinking of writing a sequel, and it looks like you want me to as well!
I've got a few ideas lined up, so I'll get writing. Thanks for your wonderful support and reviews, everyone's who read this. Thank you. =D
1/10/2010 c12 Corrie
Omg omg omg please write a sequel! You will so be my most favorite person in the world if you do! I loved your first story! If you need ideas or anything email me at I really like where that storie was headed and I'm sad to see it end! But anyways great storie and I would love love love to help you on a new one ! =)
Omg omg omg please write a sequel! You will so be my most favorite person in the world if you do! I loved your first story! If you need ideas or anything email me at I really like where that storie was headed and I'm sad to see it end! But anyways great storie and I would love love love to help you on a new one ! =)
1/5/2010 c11 7maysecret
O! Castle is CIA? interesting! and esposito and beckett? Wow! That is a twist i didn't see, but, maybe wouldn't mind happening! :D
7maysecretO! Castle is CIA? interesting! and esposito and beckett? Wow! That is a twist i didn't see, but, maybe wouldn't mind happening! :D
12/31/2009 c11 1rokerroar
I hope this is like a Scooby Do moment and the real ending is to follow as Esposito hitting on Beckett, just not right. Plus who told Esposito what Castle was doing with the CIA. I cannot imagine Castle telling anyone before Bexkett. Overall this chapter does not sit well with the rest of the story.
1rokerroarI hope this is like a Scooby Do moment and the real ending is to follow as Esposito hitting on Beckett, just not right. Plus who told Esposito what Castle was doing with the CIA. I cannot imagine Castle telling anyone before Bexkett. Overall this chapter does not sit well with the rest of the story.