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8/22/2010 c6 kate
good story so far hope to read new chapter soon
6/4/2010 c6 The Dragon and the Hare
I think you need a beta *suggests self*. There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes. The first few chapters have no pace and it seems like the story is getting nowhere, quickly. I'd suggest having a look back and maybe re-write a bit, so you don't spend so long just on the train ride to Hogwarts.

I think this story has a lot of potential, and I look forward to future chapters :)
3/27/2010 c6 SweetieCherrie
i hope she is sorted into gryffindor or ravenclaw;)
3/27/2010 c6 Cassiopea11
Awesome! I absoulutely adored it! But who's Rika?
2/21/2010 c5 Cassiopea11
LAWL! Thats a right brilliant idea! Hurry up and update!
2/21/2010 c4 Cassiopea11
Lol poor Albus sharing a compartment with a funny nutcase!
2/21/2010 c3 Cassiopea11
Aw poor Raven!
2/21/2010 c5 SweetieCherrie
great story! can't wait to see what house she ends up in:)

btw, you wrote that albus haed silver/white hair, why? he's supposed to look just like harry, with black hair and green eyes, and james like james sr, with black(brown) hair and brown/hazel eyes.
2/20/2010 c2 SweetieCherrie
i really hope she isn't going to be evil! great story so far:D
2/20/2010 c2 Cassiopea11
Hilarious as ever!
10/27/2009 c1 24RedCloakedMaiden
One note: Albus, Scorpius and Rose are all first years starting out. Otherwise, I can't comment as there was one orginal word in that chapter.
10/26/2009 c1 Cassiopea11
Cant wait for the actual chapter!

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