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7/16/2012 c4 21Queen GR
I would gladly be your Beta. Lord knows you need one.
Your grammar was better in Horizon, I've noticed multiple spelling and capitalisation mistakes, and you've made one enormous, crucial mistake.
ELECTRONIC DEVICES DO NOT WORK AROUND MAGIC. If Arrie has a protective spell on her of the magnitude you're describing, she would never be able to use a telephone. Let alone an iPod or laptop!

But I do love the angle you're taking with this story. The idea is hardly original, but your take on it is unique. I especially love your inclusion of how America is more relaxed in terms of magic. Also, Luna. Brilliantly executed. I do enjoy the idea that Luna was taught upper-class manners from the wrong century, which is why she's so odd.
And Jackalopes.
YES.
12/14/2009 c4 T
I definitely think Nibbles should go. Perhaps he could be undetectable to anyone who would not want him there.
12/14/2009 c4 6Wish for eternal happiness
Awesome Story, Can't wait for chapter 4!

-Bella
11/29/2009 c3 13XxXHarleyQuinnXxX
Aw...I'm sorry you're sick.

Great story so far...keep up the good work.

I'm sorry about the death of your niece too...it's terrible to loose a loved one...

Best wishes,

Harley Q.
11/14/2009 c3 Maddog285
Hope you get well soon. Good chapter, I can start to get a hint of where you are going with the introduction of some of the people who Ivy associats with.
11/14/2009 c3 AequusTempestas
Great Story! I Hope Harriette to school in America first oh oh please bring in Moony lol! Good Story
10/31/2009 c2 Jessalynvix
this story looks like it is going to be great.
10/28/2009 c1 29Sakura Lisel
*lol* I can't wait to see the magical worlds reaction when they find out that their Boy-Who-Lived is really a girl. *lol* Ginny's future hopes and dreams of being happily married to the legendary 'Harry Potter' are going to be crushed when she finds out.

though if they go back to America, I hope Arrie goes to an American magical school for a couple of years instead of Hogwarts and lets the UK sweat it out as they try and find out where their missing 'boy' savior is. *lol*

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