7/11/2010 c1 watshifdjfgndg
maybe it's little late to review but oh god i loved this oneshot! i was just remembering my good old ssx days and decide to read some ssx fanfiction, and look, here i am! i really really miss ssx, and this oneshot made my day! :D (wished it didn't have to end)

-random person surfing the web. :)

12/23/2009 c1 3Gleeful Melancholy
Ah this makes me want to play the game right now. =) What a great one-shot! Besides everyone being IC, I liked that you used a group of seemingly random characters from the game who would not usually hang out with each other.

Even though it wasn't horror, I was actually starting to freak out when Psymon did. I thought Elise had been possessed, or that it was a ghost/spirit disguised as Elise and luring Psymon to his death. But really, I got the chills towards the end of this story, and IMO, that was a good way to end it. Because, you know...whatever Psymon turned around and saw, he believed that he and Elise both were going to survive. Or if you're pessimistic, a reader could've gone that way too. ^^ I used to hate them, but now I'm into the create your own ending-endings.

Lastly, I used to dislike Psymon a lot, but I really enjoyed him here because I think he was in character, but not stupid-crazy. And I liked that he went in to help Elise, because it made him look human.

Another cool story there, you have one interesting imagination.

11/2/2009 c1 5iheartdonuts
Totally cool!

Psymon always makes me laugh!

"But Psymon was nowhere near finished. “CHICKENS!” he continued to shout. “Ooho look at me I’m Mac and I’m SO COOL. I talk like a gangsta!”"

Lololol! Great job!