for Unsuspecting7/29/2020 c62 Guest
I like the story I just feel like it’s dragging on a bit
I like the story I just feel like it’s dragging on a bit
6/12/2018 c66 Guest
I’m not crying your crying this is bloody beautiful
I’m not crying your crying this is bloody beautiful
6/20/2013 c66 
2n0vad0se
This was a such a great story and I've enjoyed it so much :) please have a look at mine on my profile page if you have time and tell me what you think, it's called Northern Skies...
2n0vad0seThis was a such a great story and I've enjoyed it so much :) please have a look at mine on my profile page if you have time and tell me what you think, it's called Northern Skies...
3/21/2013 c3 Valerie
How would Alex know Rachel was Paul's imprint? &they're too dramatic now, suddenly screaming or screeching at each other. I'm enjoying this but it's kind of irritating
How would Alex know Rachel was Paul's imprint? &they're too dramatic now, suddenly screaming or screeching at each other. I'm enjoying this but it's kind of irritating
1/9/2013 c48 Lexa
My God i thought that he had actually forgotten her. Don't do that! Scared the crap outta me!
My God i thought that he had actually forgotten her. Don't do that! Scared the crap outta me!
1/9/2013 c46 Lexa
NOOOO their baby would have been so Cute! :'(
NOOOO their baby would have been so Cute! :'(
1/9/2013 c44 Lexa
I know that Alex is different, but the whole "I'm not pretty, you don't love me, blah blah blah" thing is getting irritating. Scenes like that have probably taken up 7 chapters of this fanfic so far ;P
I know that Alex is different, but the whole "I'm not pretty, you don't love me, blah blah blah" thing is getting irritating. Scenes like that have probably taken up 7 chapters of this fanfic so far ;P
1/8/2013 c36 Lexa
This is now very depressing to read because my real name is Alex.. But I want to know how it ends, so I guess I'll just keep reading. Good writing, by the way b
This is now very depressing to read because my real name is Alex.. But I want to know how it ends, so I guess I'll just keep reading. Good writing, by the way b
1/8/2013 c34 Lexa
NOOOOOOO
stupid barmaid giving him the dang pills.
NOOOOOOO
stupid barmaid giving him the dang pills.
8/12/2012 c66 yan
wat a long story a little bit dramatic
but it happy ending anyway...
wat a long story a little bit dramatic
but it happy ending anyway...
8/5/2012 c5 3OMG iTs JeSsY
Just for the record, I love it! But you have the wolf pack talking in a mixture of Canadians and Brits... It's really amusing! But I love the story!
3OMG iTs JeSsYJust for the record, I love it! But you have the wolf pack talking in a mixture of Canadians and Brits... It's really amusing! But I love the story!
7/15/2012 c66 151Bendleshnitz
It took me months, but I read it all and had lots of fun with these two! Great story. Amazing work. I wouldn't be able to write such a long fic EVER! It¡s wonderful and impressive the clear amount of love, time and effort you put into this.
Congrats :)
151BendleshnitzIt took me months, but I read it all and had lots of fun with these two! Great story. Amazing work. I wouldn't be able to write such a long fic EVER! It¡s wonderful and impressive the clear amount of love, time and effort you put into this.
Congrats :)
7/10/2012 c66 Chelsea
Hey! I don't know if you still check your reviews, but this story is bloody brilliant!;D *says in American accent* lol I have a horrible English accent, but i've learned so many cool phrases just by reading this story lol! This is by far the best Embry imprint story that I've ever read! You captured Alex's character so well! I felt like I was her best friend honestly! Haha but your writing is amazing, so please don't think otherwise!(: I am so sad to have finished your story already:( I want to see Aaron grow up and to see if they have anymore kids, but it's ok because I know that you couldn't go on forever haha I love how they became so comfortable and went through so much(: It was thrilling to read each twist and turn. I literally spent 3 days reading this nonstop lololxD I was addicted the whole way through:D I actually enjoyed learning about the English culture and loved how it was a key part to your story(: I would love to travel to England sometime knowing some phrases now haha;D thank you so much for writing this! My life has been complete lolol
- Your Biggest Fan/Reader From America:D
Hey! I don't know if you still check your reviews, but this story is bloody brilliant!;D *says in American accent* lol I have a horrible English accent, but i've learned so many cool phrases just by reading this story lol! This is by far the best Embry imprint story that I've ever read! You captured Alex's character so well! I felt like I was her best friend honestly! Haha but your writing is amazing, so please don't think otherwise!(: I am so sad to have finished your story already:( I want to see Aaron grow up and to see if they have anymore kids, but it's ok because I know that you couldn't go on forever haha I love how they became so comfortable and went through so much(: It was thrilling to read each twist and turn. I literally spent 3 days reading this nonstop lololxD I was addicted the whole way through:D I actually enjoyed learning about the English culture and loved how it was a key part to your story(: I would love to travel to England sometime knowing some phrases now haha;D thank you so much for writing this! My life has been complete lolol
- Your Biggest Fan/Reader From America:D
5/17/2011 c66 Just a Girl INACTIVE
Wow! That was one long story, and I've finally finished it! I was annoyed, angry, upset, happy, tearful, so many emotions when reading this story. At times I hated half the characters but now I love them! It's a great story and mega long, but very drama filled. I never expected the journey that I got, it was great even with the mistakes and such. One question, did they ever decide on Godparents? Because I don't think they did, I was wondering whether this would go in your sequel which I know is a while of yet...Anyway, thanks for the journey with this story now I'll just have to sit tight and wait for your next update of forbidden love!
Wow! That was one long story, and I've finally finished it! I was annoyed, angry, upset, happy, tearful, so many emotions when reading this story. At times I hated half the characters but now I love them! It's a great story and mega long, but very drama filled. I never expected the journey that I got, it was great even with the mistakes and such. One question, did they ever decide on Godparents? Because I don't think they did, I was wondering whether this would go in your sequel which I know is a while of yet...Anyway, thanks for the journey with this story now I'll just have to sit tight and wait for your next update of forbidden love!