for Grasping Darkness5/4/2023 c14 Guest
The chapters could be shorter if you toned down a little of the I need to be in you stuff. A few times gets the point across but half the chapter is just too much. Way too wordy and starts to get boring with the redundancy
The chapters could be shorter if you toned down a little of the I need to be in you stuff. A few times gets the point across but half the chapter is just too much. Way too wordy and starts to get boring with the redundancy
2/4/2023 c11 WordsMusicMagic
I cant even describe how much I love this EmovampWard! He makes me gigglesnort and his inner monologue is hilarious. I hope that he convinces Bella to be like him soon so that he can have a happier existence.
I cant even describe how much I love this EmovampWard! He makes me gigglesnort and his inner monologue is hilarious. I hope that he convinces Bella to be like him soon so that he can have a happier existence.
2/3/2023 c4 WordsMusicMagic
Wow! This is awesome! I always wanted to read an Edward who was darker, more intense, and more of a man. WindowWard is H.O.T.
Wow! This is awesome! I always wanted to read an Edward who was darker, more intense, and more of a man. WindowWard is H.O.T.
1/23/2023 c28 JaysWorld2
gotta say, this story threw me for a loop. It was not at all what I expected.-p0rnbut became so much more. It also provided the most interesting twists and turns I have seen in a fic for years. Thank you for sharing!
gotta say, this story threw me for a loop. It was not at all what I expected.-p0rnbut became so much more. It also provided the most interesting twists and turns I have seen in a fic for years. Thank you for sharing!
1/8/2021 c29 
2TrillionSchiffer
So let me get this straight. JB and Bella are in a 2yr relationship and Bella is bored. Some how she has not been able to get an orgasm in 2yrs despite JB best efforts.. Roll my eyes. Edward, has been sneaking in here room for the past 3 months after JB hits it, and has taken it upon himself to give Bella what she needs. Roll my eyes. One of THE MOST ridiculous starts of an ExB ETERNAL LOVE STORY.
Hey dad, how did you know mom was the one for you? Well son it was easy, I watched her ride a guy till he came in her three times and somehow she managed to still looked bored and unsatisfied. Then weeks later after watching them go at it again, I wait till he leaves, and while she was half asleep, I eat her unwashed recentlycut drenched p**y like a starving man at a buffet! And when she came, we snuck around the other guys back for a while. Hahaha your mom was a despicable whor*, unworthy of respect, but I knew she was MY despicable whor" unworthy of respect! Now go. out and find one of your own son. Make sure she just rolled off the last guy, and make sure he left a mess for you to clean up! hahahaha cuck life all the way my boy!
Yeah... thats a great beginning. All love stories should start that way. lmao.
And as all the smut goes down, Bella and Edward pretend they are not two disgusting people and everyone except for Paul, plays along.
There is some minor external drama with Charlie, but no real biggie.
James is sitting Edward up for murder by leaving bodies everywhere. and wolf blood turns vamps human. and Edward becomes human for Bellas sake. why? who the hell knows. Some ridiculous attempt to redeem himself or self hate or just plain F it why not thinking. The Cullen dream is a reality, they could go. back to being full humans. Whatever.
Anyway. thanks for the parts that were creative. good job there!
2TrillionSchifferSo let me get this straight. JB and Bella are in a 2yr relationship and Bella is bored. Some how she has not been able to get an orgasm in 2yrs despite JB best efforts.. Roll my eyes. Edward, has been sneaking in here room for the past 3 months after JB hits it, and has taken it upon himself to give Bella what she needs. Roll my eyes. One of THE MOST ridiculous starts of an ExB ETERNAL LOVE STORY.
Hey dad, how did you know mom was the one for you? Well son it was easy, I watched her ride a guy till he came in her three times and somehow she managed to still looked bored and unsatisfied. Then weeks later after watching them go at it again, I wait till he leaves, and while she was half asleep, I eat her unwashed recentlycut drenched p**y like a starving man at a buffet! And when she came, we snuck around the other guys back for a while. Hahaha your mom was a despicable whor*, unworthy of respect, but I knew she was MY despicable whor" unworthy of respect! Now go. out and find one of your own son. Make sure she just rolled off the last guy, and make sure he left a mess for you to clean up! hahahaha cuck life all the way my boy!
Yeah... thats a great beginning. All love stories should start that way. lmao.
And as all the smut goes down, Bella and Edward pretend they are not two disgusting people and everyone except for Paul, plays along.
There is some minor external drama with Charlie, but no real biggie.
James is sitting Edward up for murder by leaving bodies everywhere. and wolf blood turns vamps human. and Edward becomes human for Bellas sake. why? who the hell knows. Some ridiculous attempt to redeem himself or self hate or just plain F it why not thinking. The Cullen dream is a reality, they could go. back to being full humans. Whatever.
Anyway. thanks for the parts that were creative. good job there!
11/17/2020 c26 EdwardsVampTramp
Speechless!
Have never read a story where the vamps turned human! Nice concept!
Speechless!
Have never read a story where the vamps turned human! Nice concept!
11/17/2020 c21 EdwardsVampTramp
Oh God! Poor Edward!
The pain he must be in; not being able to stop himself.
Oh God! Poor Edward!
The pain he must be in; not being able to stop himself.