6/10/2012 c10 6BlueStrawberryIII
Oh muh gosh you must finish! Youre really good and I need to know what happennnnnns! ;3; Dont leave us all hanging!
(Please update please please please update)
Oh muh gosh you must finish! Youre really good and I need to know what happennnnnns! ;3; Dont leave us all hanging!
(Please update please please please update)
6/2/2012 c10 36Bleachy-nii
Ah! you have to finish! I'm so enjoying this story and I haven't been this caught on by a story in so long
Ah! you have to finish! I'm so enjoying this story and I haven't been this caught on by a story in so long
4/16/2012 c1 14AlchemyOtaku0922
This is awesome! The beginning was so amazing and so SAD and I just loved it. Great work!
This is awesome! The beginning was so amazing and so SAD and I just loved it. Great work!
3/19/2012 c10 Leylia Wolfe
I don't know about villains but I've definitely been enjoying your fanfiction so far. Aside from a few spots in chapter 9 where i got a little confused, I think you're a really good writer
I don't know about villains but I've definitely been enjoying your fanfiction so far. Aside from a few spots in chapter 9 where i got a little confused, I think you're a really good writer
3/18/2012 c10 Baruga
I think you shouldn't put too many villains that do something important in your story. It might confuse a couple readers and make the story too complicated. But the chapter was good and a confrontation between Slade and Robin seems to be coming, which is great.
I think you shouldn't put too many villains that do something important in your story. It might confuse a couple readers and make the story too complicated. But the chapter was good and a confrontation between Slade and Robin seems to be coming, which is great.
3/6/2012 c8 batmail.com
write more soon if you can
good story like it.
write more soon if you can
good story like it.
1/10/2012 c9 SmileyFace
Wow, you've seriously got great talent. Seriously.
Your sentences flow smoothly, you use descriptive words, I'm just amazed!
Please continue this, and SOON!
Wow, you've seriously got great talent. Seriously.
Your sentences flow smoothly, you use descriptive words, I'm just amazed!
Please continue this, and SOON!
1/10/2012 c9 4dlsky
I'm glad to know that you have decided not to abadon this.
Keep up the story it really is a good tale.
Note: many times its after the story is done and over with that we pick up readers.
They archive us and then in searches we become known as others find, add us to favorits lists and others read others lists.
So don't give up or be discouraged you don't get readers reviews.
Its all in the stats and for our own benifit.
I'm enjoying the story, so thanks for writing it.
I'm glad to know that you have decided not to abadon this.
Keep up the story it really is a good tale.
Note: many times its after the story is done and over with that we pick up readers.
They archive us and then in searches we become known as others find, add us to favorits lists and others read others lists.
So don't give up or be discouraged you don't get readers reviews.
Its all in the stats and for our own benifit.
I'm enjoying the story, so thanks for writing it.
11/22/2011 c8 1GreyBlob
"He had played chess against himself in his mind ten times already, always ending in a stalemate."
LOL. So Slade. Good chapter. I couldn't remember the whole story so I went back to chapter 1 and re-read! Now I'm re-excited. The Batman sideplot is a really interesting twist and I'm always in love when Dr. Crane is involved.
Your cliffhangers are getting worse!
"He had played chess against himself in his mind ten times already, always ending in a stalemate."
LOL. So Slade. Good chapter. I couldn't remember the whole story so I went back to chapter 1 and re-read! Now I'm re-excited. The Batman sideplot is a really interesting twist and I'm always in love when Dr. Crane is involved.
Your cliffhangers are getting worse!
11/13/2011 c7 Panic at the Beatles disco
Hurry Up! finish writing this Epic Fanfiction!
I'm begging you!
one of the best I've ever read for any fanfiction,
it's like reading the script for a darker, more evolved version of teentitans! Man,I wish they made an episode like this story!
Hurry Up! finish writing this Epic Fanfiction!
I'm begging you!
one of the best I've ever read for any fanfiction,
it's like reading the script for a darker, more evolved version of teentitans! Man,I wish they made an episode like this story!
10/21/2011 c7 heromail.com
write soon if you can good story
so far like it.
write soon if you can good story
so far like it.
10/16/2011 c7 37Souffles In Space
HELL YEAH! An update! :D
The Joker's dialogue was inspired, by the way - very in-character. Hmm, Deathstroke seems to have his eye on Scarecrow... could it have something do with the dust from "Haunted"...? (because that HAS to be his fear gas)
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next chapter.
HELL YEAH! An update! :D
The Joker's dialogue was inspired, by the way - very in-character. Hmm, Deathstroke seems to have his eye on Scarecrow... could it have something do with the dust from "Haunted"...? (because that HAS to be his fear gas)
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for the next chapter.
10/16/2011 c7 6TheNightwingfan
Lame! What chu talkin bout! I enjoy this chapter, and I always love the Arkham inmates!
Update soon(:
Lame! What chu talkin bout! I enjoy this chapter, and I always love the Arkham inmates!
Update soon(: