for Not A Dream10/16/2011 c7 
2xrockinrobin
Loved this chapter! Your writing had a wonderfully dark tone throughout the chapter and the end of it practically left me jumping in my seat. Batman's character was spot on (I always like to point this out to author's that manage it, because I've seen Batman's character slaughtered so many times). Anyway, you have a clean writing style that's easy to meld into and your dark, grungy themes have me hooked. (The suicide bomber? Loved it! A Robin-foreshadowed murder to set Batman's nerves on edge? Love love love.)
Keep going please. Half a year updates are unacceptable after this chapter!
2xrockinrobinLoved this chapter! Your writing had a wonderfully dark tone throughout the chapter and the end of it practically left me jumping in my seat. Batman's character was spot on (I always like to point this out to author's that manage it, because I've seen Batman's character slaughtered so many times). Anyway, you have a clean writing style that's easy to meld into and your dark, grungy themes have me hooked. (The suicide bomber? Loved it! A Robin-foreshadowed murder to set Batman's nerves on edge? Love love love.)
Keep going please. Half a year updates are unacceptable after this chapter!
8/24/2011 c6 Daughter of Poseidon001144
Wow great story I can't wait til batman and Alfred Cole into the picture!
Wow great story I can't wait til batman and Alfred Cole into the picture!
6/6/2011 c6 37Souffles In Space
This is a very nice story, very well written - and the summary looks very interesting. I think Starfire is acting a little too possessive of Robin, which is something to work on, but I love the way you've written Slade.
However, I notice that you haven't updated since June last year! I'd hate for a good story like this to go to waste. Please update again!
37Souffles In SpaceThis is a very nice story, very well written - and the summary looks very interesting. I think Starfire is acting a little too possessive of Robin, which is something to work on, but I love the way you've written Slade.
However, I notice that you haven't updated since June last year! I'd hate for a good story like this to go to waste. Please update again!
8/31/2010 c1 heromail.com
update soon if you can or
at least try and finish the
story it's pretty good so far.
update soon if you can or
at least try and finish the
story it's pretty good so far.
7/27/2010 c1 hatmail.com
update soon if you can
it's really good so far.
update soon if you can
it's really good so far.
7/8/2010 c3 redmail.com
update when you can good
story so far lke it.
update when you can good
story so far lke it.
5/8/2010 c5 man.mail.com
update sometime soon if you can.
update sometime soon if you can.
4/4/2010 c5 heromail.com
update good story so far like
were it's going.
update good story so far like
were it's going.
3/29/2010 c5 Hoots
Hm...how about a virtual cherry? **hands it to you**
Sorry about wasting your time! ^^' Not intentional. Annyywaayyss...awesome chapter! I can't wait until Slade appears again. He's my FAVORITE villain!
I like it so far. You are keeping the characters in check. ^_^ Uh...what else?
Oh yeah, it is good to lesson the angst for a while, but I don't really mind either way!
Good job! ^^ Update. Now. ._.
**Hands cupcake** There! You deserve it!
Hm...how about a virtual cherry? **hands it to you**
Sorry about wasting your time! ^^' Not intentional. Annyywaayyss...awesome chapter! I can't wait until Slade appears again. He's my FAVORITE villain!
I like it so far. You are keeping the characters in check. ^_^ Uh...what else?
Oh yeah, it is good to lesson the angst for a while, but I don't really mind either way!
Good job! ^^ Update. Now. ._.
**Hands cupcake** There! You deserve it!
3/28/2010 c1 Hoots
Please, please, please, UPDATE! PLLEASE!
I am begging you here! **gets on knees**
PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!
Please, please, please, UPDATE! PLLEASE!
I am begging you here! **gets on knees**
PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP!
12/12/2009 c3 shadowwolf
I like where this is going. Please update soon!
I like where this is going. Please update soon!