11/24/2009 c3 4dlsky
I must say thus far this story holds the appeal of a mystery detective. Where are you going, what's occuring, who's being introduced? All questions of which are great opening catch-tags for the beginning four chapters. Already the emotional pace is angusty and yet speeding along. You have wrote and presented this well...captured in the moment the characters and both reader audiance as well as story-world audiance.

I look forward to reading more and seeing where this story takes off in.

Thanks for sharing.

11/16/2009 c2 3lauraluvsedward
I really like it so far! Robin's dream was super vivid and creepy, and I love that you put Batman in, i can't wait to see more of him. :)

11/9/2009 c1 3Spicule
I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.

11/7/2009 c1 2xrockinrobin
Fantastic imagery. I love how you melded the language in this to give it that dream quality. Everyone seemed in character, and you bringing Robin's fears and insecurities to the surface at the beginning looks pretty promising for upcoming chapters.

I love Robin/Slade rivalry, but there's very few people that can give them the justice they deserve. Please, continue. (:

11/3/2009 c1 sarah.mclaurinbakerbotts.com
update soon if you can good

story.

11/1/2009 c1 hjcbdvdbsuhds iscvbvbsoidbvdoi
Cool! Are you going to continue? I sure hope so, this story was really good! I like to think that Batman wouldn't do that to Robin, but it was only a dream, or hallucination. Anyway, great start and hope you continue!