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11/3/2009 c1 2Isamaru
good god, that was HOT!
11/3/2009 c1 jjack0310
pretty good, sexy too

but i woudl like to see where this goes
11/3/2009 c1 alec-potter
Awesome chapter...great scenes. Liked it very much. Will keep track of your other work as well.
11/3/2009 c1 5Desertcoyote77
LOL this was really really good. I enjoyed this story very much. Maybe you should think about a mutli chapter story next? This PWP was fun and naughty. I can't wait to read your next story!
11/3/2009 c1 Chris
Dude i have never read anything like this before. it was perfect! i could seriously understand how they were feeling since i've read the books and seen the movies. keep writing cuz it was real, and every guy's FANTASY to do. And thankyou for not using snape or any older guy in this so that hermoine didn't look like such a slut. In conclusion: this was the funniest, romantic, most erotic story ever! Thank you for the entertainment :D
11/2/2009 c1 10Stick97
Shame this is only a one shot, huge amount of potential. I really enjoyed seeing the pair learn about each other.

Keep up the great work.
11/2/2009 c1 gand982
Fun little piece. Enjoyed it very much.
11/2/2009 c1 13narusakufan1985
This is a good story. Please make some more. Harry and Hermione forever.
11/2/2009 c1 Edmond O'Donald
GREAT JOB! A wonderful mix of angst, sex, and real emotion. GREAT, GREAT JOB!

OH - and not a single grammatical error that I could find! YEA YOU!

Regards,

the_scribbler
11/2/2009 c1 ficwad
the story will not show up on ficwad after i log in just wanted you to know other wise great story.
11/2/2009 c1 Cateagle
'Tis a very nice PWP as it it, but I can certainly see them continuing and expanding their 'experiments', particularly if they find there's a strong interesting in each other anyway and that they do find that experimental interset increasing the rest. I suspect the first time Ron & Ginny find out is after Harary proposes. :D
11/2/2009 c1 allyandmax
loved this!
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