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6Arrexu
Blaming things on dark magic or using it to form new personalities was probably the worst addition to your story. It comes off as “side step-ish”. Deus ex machina if you will.
6ArrexuBlaming things on dark magic or using it to form new personalities was probably the worst addition to your story. It comes off as “side step-ish”. Deus ex machina if you will.
10/24 c69 StarGzr528
Just finished reading all that you have posted here of your wonderful story. I hope all is well with you and that you can finish this book some day.
Just finished reading all that you have posted here of your wonderful story. I hope all is well with you and that you can finish this book some day.
10/13 c69 irishblue69
I don't know if you are still writing but I wanted to let you know that I do enjoy this story. So much so that I have read it quite a few times start to finish. I do hope one day you continue this story. Thanks so much for the enjoyment that this story gives me.
I don't know if you are still writing but I wanted to let you know that I do enjoy this story. So much so that I have read it quite a few times start to finish. I do hope one day you continue this story. Thanks so much for the enjoyment that this story gives me.
7/18 c69 Junosflame
Wonderful. The detail and layers you pull are fantastic.
Wonderful. The detail and layers you pull are fantastic.
6/27 c1 thescreaminglamb
I love this story and like everyone else hope that you update this story. I hope that real life isn't being a too much of a punk. much love
I love this story and like everyone else hope that you update this story. I hope that real life isn't being a too much of a punk. much love
5/5/2023 c69 nunes
Boa tarde
Parabéns Deus te abençoe muito e te proteja sempre
Tudo de Bom
Um forte abraço
Boa tarde
Parabéns Deus te abençoe muito e te proteja sempre
Tudo de Bom
Um forte abraço
4/28/2023 c69 Thomasok
I’ve just read the story up to this point and really loved it. You have a unique perspective and really brought new angles to many characters. Thank you for writing it!
I’ve just read the story up to this point and really loved it. You have a unique perspective and really brought new angles to many characters. Thank you for writing it!
2/19/2023 c69 PowderPink73
I'm loving this. I come back to it time and again, not only when there has been an update. That being said I am looking forward to the next update...
I'm loving this. I come back to it time and again, not only when there has been an update. That being said I am looking forward to the next update...
12/26/2022 c5 20Kallanit
I like the changes you've made to this chapter. Hermione's response to the question about Voldemort's blood status is much better.
20KallanitI like the changes you've made to this chapter. Hermione's response to the question about Voldemort's blood status is much better.
11/14/2022 c69 Stefani
I hope you continue Writing your fanfic I absolutely adore it And can't wait for the next installment
I hope you continue Writing your fanfic I absolutely adore it And can't wait for the next installment