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3MagicBananas
Hm...I don't know what to make of this one...I've read a lot of stories that had to do with Harry and Ginny and this is the only one where Ginny is pregnant. It certainly is original...I like it. I wouldn't do another one like it though. You were stretching it pretty far...
3MagicBananasHm...I don't know what to make of this one...I've read a lot of stories that had to do with Harry and Ginny and this is the only one where Ginny is pregnant. It certainly is original...I like it. I wouldn't do another one like it though. You were stretching it pretty far...
11/22/2009 c1 5harryandjamesluvr
Well I liked it! I;, taking it it is the year aftet the battle? Well it is very cute :)
5harryandjamesluvrWell I liked it! I;, taking it it is the year aftet the battle? Well it is very cute :)
11/6/2009 c1 40Historybuff1536
This was very rushed, and everyone was OOC; mostly Ginny.
You might want to start putting a little bit more "elbow grease" in to your story development.
-Misty
40Historybuff1536This was very rushed, and everyone was OOC; mostly Ginny.
You might want to start putting a little bit more "elbow grease" in to your story development.
-Misty
11/5/2009 c1 15hazelquill21
I think you should continue with this instead of leaving it as a one-shot. It has a lot of potential, and I think it could make a really good story. Let me know if you'll continue, and I'll definitly read it.
-sapphirerose21-
15hazelquill21I think you should continue with this instead of leaving it as a one-shot. It has a lot of potential, and I think it could make a really good story. Let me know if you'll continue, and I'll definitly read it.
-sapphirerose21-
11/5/2009 c1 39sbmcneil
Cute story, but it feels a little rushed. It's a little hard to tell when this is set (7th year? after war?), but it was very enjoyable.
39sbmcneilCute story, but it feels a little rushed. It's a little hard to tell when this is set (7th year? after war?), but it was very enjoyable.
11/4/2009 c1 11always-unwritten
i like it a lot since it's different from a lot of the typical perfect life fics. but you should label this slightly AU because (according to the lexcion) james wasn't born until 2005. but i think this has potential
11always-unwritteni like it a lot since it's different from a lot of the typical perfect life fics. but you should label this slightly AU because (according to the lexcion) james wasn't born until 2005. but i think this has potential
11/4/2009 c1 9gibby101
Go you! I told you oneshots are easy! That's why I'm writing a collection of scattered one shots! And to that nasty review writer from Brazil, Ginny and Harry were just FINE!
Even though I'm like the fifth or sixth review, I read it first! And I liked it!
Don't worry about ideas Dude... They'll come to you. Now I don't know if I meant to txt that you or not... oh well...
9gibby101Go you! I told you oneshots are easy! That's why I'm writing a collection of scattered one shots! And to that nasty review writer from Brazil, Ginny and Harry were just FINE!
Even though I'm like the fifth or sixth review, I read it first! And I liked it!
Don't worry about ideas Dude... They'll come to you. Now I don't know if I meant to txt that you or not... oh well...
11/4/2009 c1 1ecao
1. Harry and Ginny are a tad out of character... Ginny more so;
2. Work a bit on developing your ideas... the fic sounds "abrupt";
3. It sounds like you just sat at the computer and jotted down your own version of a teenage drama: too cliché,
4. Grammar and spelling are not that bad, which, in this fanfiction business, means a great deal...
1ecao1. Harry and Ginny are a tad out of character... Ginny more so;
2. Work a bit on developing your ideas... the fic sounds "abrupt";
3. It sounds like you just sat at the computer and jotted down your own version of a teenage drama: too cliché,
4. Grammar and spelling are not that bad, which, in this fanfiction business, means a great deal...
11/4/2009 c1 3benperez31
That was a nice one-shot. I have seen some stories where Ginny gets pregnant while at Hogwarts even after Voldemort's defeat and this is a great one. I hope to see more or even a continuation of this.
3benperez31That was a nice one-shot. I have seen some stories where Ginny gets pregnant while at Hogwarts even after Voldemort's defeat and this is a great one. I hope to see more or even a continuation of this.
11/4/2009 c1 24DukeBrymin
Not bad-I'm assuming that this is Ginny's seventh year, and Harry went back to do his seventh year at the same time?
24DukeBryminNot bad-I'm assuming that this is Ginny's seventh year, and Harry went back to do his seventh year at the same time?