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11/6/2009 c1 7LovableAngelWithHorns
A soild base for a good story. Just start out slow and work your way up. If u do big skips make sure u do a flash back or two. SOunds like a good story though can't wait to read more !
11/6/2009 c1 6Dark Kurayami
Doesn't sound bad the summary you have. I'm a bit curious to see how you will develop it.
11/6/2009 c1 ranni
Sounds interesting i'd like to see more.
11/6/2009 c1 Suzaku24
I like the plot to this...you should continue with this.
11/6/2009 c1 PoisonIvyCat92
definently keep writing...it looks like it could be a good story...

oxoxoxo Moonlight xoxoxox
11/6/2009 c1 VB
I HATE YOU! Seriously I read the summary and was so excited only to find this itty bitty short... I can't even call it a paragraph, its shorter than the summary. Update dangit! If you give it up as a lost cause I will hunt you down!
11/6/2009 c1 SSibs
sounds like it has potential. and by cot death did you maybe mean SIDS (sudden infant death syndrome)?
11/6/2009 c1 2angelkitty77
oh yea please write more of this. i cant wait to read more
11/6/2009 c1 fukinperfect
You should definitely continue its unique and I cant wait to read it.
11/6/2009 c1 lovers-hatred
i can not wait for this story to start . will harry be okay ? and will dumblfuck be killed ? and how will the gundam pilots react to the abuse that harry had to get ? please write the story soon .
11/6/2009 c1 Jen
This sounds very interesting and is the first of it's kind that I have heard of. I say go for it and that I look forward to reading it.
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