11/6/2009 c1 7LovableAngelWithHorns
A soild base for a good story. Just start out slow and work your way up. If u do big skips make sure u do a flash back or two. SOunds like a good story though can't wait to read more !
A soild base for a good story. Just start out slow and work your way up. If u do big skips make sure u do a flash back or two. SOunds like a good story though can't wait to read more !
11/6/2009 c1 6Dark Kurayami
Doesn't sound bad the summary you have. I'm a bit curious to see how you will develop it.
Doesn't sound bad the summary you have. I'm a bit curious to see how you will develop it.
11/6/2009 c1 ranni
Sounds interesting i'd like to see more.
Sounds interesting i'd like to see more.
11/6/2009 c1 Suzaku24
I like the plot to this...you should continue with this.
I like the plot to this...you should continue with this.
11/6/2009 c1 PoisonIvyCat92
definently keep writing...it looks like it could be a good story...
oxoxoxo Moonlight xoxoxox
definently keep writing...it looks like it could be a good story...
oxoxoxo Moonlight xoxoxox
11/6/2009 c1 VB
I HATE YOU! Seriously I read the summary and was so excited only to find this itty bitty short... I can't even call it a paragraph, its shorter than the summary. Update dangit! If you give it up as a lost cause I will hunt you down!
I HATE YOU! Seriously I read the summary and was so excited only to find this itty bitty short... I can't even call it a paragraph, its shorter than the summary. Update dangit! If you give it up as a lost cause I will hunt you down!
11/6/2009 c1 SSibs
sounds like it has potential. and by cot death did you maybe mean SIDS (sudden infant death syndrome)?
sounds like it has potential. and by cot death did you maybe mean SIDS (sudden infant death syndrome)?
11/6/2009 c1 lovers-hatred
i can not wait for this story to start . will harry be okay ? and will dumblfuck be killed ? and how will the gundam pilots react to the abuse that harry had to get ? please write the story soon .
i can not wait for this story to start . will harry be okay ? and will dumblfuck be killed ? and how will the gundam pilots react to the abuse that harry had to get ? please write the story soon .
11/6/2009 c1 Jen
This sounds very interesting and is the first of it's kind that I have heard of. I say go for it and that I look forward to reading it.
This sounds very interesting and is the first of it's kind that I have heard of. I say go for it and that I look forward to reading it.