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10/1/2012 c1 Ealasaid Una
interesting beginning
11/28/2009 c1 20Austra
Sounds way too much like a MarySue story. Sorry to break it to you, but it's the truth.
11/11/2009 c2 Bekah
nice, i think dis will be a good story.

- bekah
11/9/2009 c2 3EmmerLiz
i love how you didn't just go on and on about "harp-the most beautiful girl in all the lands". That she started off so awkward allows her character to be relatable to. i mean, who hasn't gone through an awkward phase, lol. other than that, genuinely good story. I would suggest reading through before posting to notice any spelling/grammer errors before posting. mostly it seemed stuff that spellcheck would recognize. i've had to repost several of my chapters because i didn't notice things till afterwards lol
11/9/2009 c2 1Matisse
aw Race is so cute! im interested in finding out what happened to Harp to make her come to America. waiting to find out :)
11/8/2009 c1 Bekah
I like it. Please,if you have time, write more.

- Bekah

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