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7/6 c41 Guest
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7/5 c7 LegacyBanana
Are you illiterate? Or are you just so horrendous at spelling that even a 7 year Naruto could spell better than you. Also your grammar is so bad, like have you not heard of apostrophe's or comma's. Ughh this is such a good concept, only if a competent human would write it.
7/5 c3 Guest
I like this, but Naruto's whisker marks are not a result of the sealing, he had them when he was born, since Kushina was the jinchuriki before Naruto. You can check the flashbacks, he had them before Minato sealed Kurama inside him
6/24 c26 jiwames1
I really don't like how we can't just force on the battle. Every five to eight lines, we have to switch between the audience, the battle, and the kages booth.
6/22 c13 yochan123
And this is where I quit this story. The horrible grammar and spelling is even beyond my tolerance, not to mention all of these super stupid characters playing pretend ninja with their crushes and angst
6/22 c12 yochan123
Jesus fuck kiba is trash I hate reading about this idiot
6/22 c11 yochan123
Ugh did you really have to put him back in stupid team 7 with the emo and crazy Sakura? I hate these characters

Sasuke is so gonna defect to orochi
6/22 c10 yochan123
Sigh this is why it’s so pointless to put him in a village with idiotic shits like kiba Sakura and sasuke
6/22 c9 yochan123
Sigh now naruto had to deal with idiots
6/22 c8 yochan123
Finally a smart naruto who can see his resemblance to the fourth Hokage

And also no spoiled princesses for him
6/22 c7 yochan123
I hope naruto has his future harem ppl here
6/22 c4 yochan123
Damn jiraiya can he stop being such a shit
6/22 c3 yochan123
Minato what an idiot just let hiruzen sacrifice himself sigh
At least they left now so naruto won’t grow up as an outcast
6/17 c41 Darkanaklusmos70
Awesome story you got there
6/16 c5 PLEASE
Stop trying to be funny with all the "Jiraya jokes"...
It's not funny at all, just cringey and cracky
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