for The Hope of the Senju Clan9/1/2021 c2 Guest
Tsunade is devil
Tsunade is devil
9/1/2021 c1 Guest
They got dirty
They got dirty
8/25/2021 c29 Hana no Somei
I love the story only one thing I would hate to se Sasuke with karui seen as she is much too prideful to fall for a pretty boy with such a attitude
I love the story only one thing I would hate to se Sasuke with karui seen as she is much too prideful to fall for a pretty boy with such a attitude
8/14/2021 c20 
2Tibokas
only have one thing to say about naruto getting the curse mark. Nope, not reading further
2Tibokasonly have one thing to say about naruto getting the curse mark. Nope, not reading further
8/3/2021 c20 Guest
Your fanfic is great and all but I stopped reading the time you gave naruto thr curse mark
Your fanfic is great and all but I stopped reading the time you gave naruto thr curse mark
7/6/2021 c41 Guest
Please, Update
Please, Update
7/5/2021 c7 2D-Trinx
Are you illiterate? Or are you just so horrendous at spelling that even a 7 year Naruto could spell better than you. Also your grammar is so bad, like have you not heard of apostrophe's or comma's. Ughh this is such a good concept, only if a competent human would write it.
2D-TrinxAre you illiterate? Or are you just so horrendous at spelling that even a 7 year Naruto could spell better than you. Also your grammar is so bad, like have you not heard of apostrophe's or comma's. Ughh this is such a good concept, only if a competent human would write it.
7/5/2021 c3 Guest
I like this, but Naruto's whisker marks are not a result of the sealing, he had them when he was born, since Kushina was the jinchuriki before Naruto. You can check the flashbacks, he had them before Minato sealed Kurama inside him
I like this, but Naruto's whisker marks are not a result of the sealing, he had them when he was born, since Kushina was the jinchuriki before Naruto. You can check the flashbacks, he had them before Minato sealed Kurama inside him
6/24/2021 c26 jiwames1
I really don't like how we can't just force on the battle. Every five to eight lines, we have to switch between the audience, the battle, and the kages booth.
I really don't like how we can't just force on the battle. Every five to eight lines, we have to switch between the audience, the battle, and the kages booth.
6/22/2021 c13 yochan123
And this is where I quit this story. The horrible grammar and spelling is even beyond my tolerance, not to mention all of these super stupid characters playing pretend ninja with their crushes and angst
And this is where I quit this story. The horrible grammar and spelling is even beyond my tolerance, not to mention all of these super stupid characters playing pretend ninja with their crushes and angst