for The Hope of the Senju Clan1/9/2021 c7 1 question
radio talk/demon talk. I’m getting some alastor vibes
radio talk/demon talk. I’m getting some alastor vibes
1/1/2021 c32 
2needmorecaffeine
is good as hell Naruto died
and then in the next chapter he became Alive again cause dragon ball yes?
fckng plot armor
2needmorecaffeineis good as hell Naruto died
and then in the next chapter he became Alive again cause dragon ball yes?
fckng plot armor
1/1/2021 c20 Guest
You got be fucking kidding me I swear to fucking god if he goes to that motherfucking little fucking waste of fucking piece of shit Orochimaru who is fucking. Shit I will be fucking pissed nigga I will fucking destroy you fucking shitty ass mother fucking author I’m pisseddddddd
P.S. I’m sorry I’m just so fucking angry right now, and I’m also sorry about insulting you author. I’m just so motherfucking pissed now that I’m seeing fucking red it’s a goddamn shit believing fucking. Dbdhdu miracle that I haven’t broke my fucking IPad yet. I’m still sorry btw.
You got be fucking kidding me I swear to fucking god if he goes to that motherfucking little fucking waste of fucking piece of shit Orochimaru who is fucking. Shit I will be fucking pissed nigga I will fucking destroy you fucking shitty ass mother fucking author I’m pisseddddddd
P.S. I’m sorry I’m just so fucking angry right now, and I’m also sorry about insulting you author. I’m just so motherfucking pissed now that I’m seeing fucking red it’s a goddamn shit believing fucking. Dbdhdu miracle that I haven’t broke my fucking IPad yet. I’m still sorry btw.
12/31/2020 c19 needmorecaffeine
Yeah yeah, ur reason why Orochimaru give Naruto curse seal is good as hell, like ur discontinue this fic moron
Yeah yeah, ur reason why Orochimaru give Naruto curse seal is good as hell, like ur discontinue this fic moron
12/9/2020 c1 juan esteban
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12/3/2020 c1 Emperor Ch'ah Toh Almehen
Can someone please continue this wonderful Story and make Naruto and Sasuke like Indra and Ashura
Can someone please continue this wonderful Story and make Naruto and Sasuke like Indra and Ashura
12/2/2020 c36 Guest
Idk what to say, I'm just kinda disappointed. Good story, but there's a lot of unnecessary conflict. What's the point of giving Naruto anxiety if it gets solved the next chapter? What's the point of killing Naruto when he gets revived the next chapter? What's the point of having Naruto fight top tiers if he doesn't gain anything and doesn't loose anything? The original fight against Itachi and Kisame introduced the Akatsuki as a serious problem. This one did absolutely nothing to move the story forward. Like I said, I'm just kinda disappointed and dissatisfied with the overall flow of this story. It has so much potential, but I feel like it falls short a lot of the time. Many of the scenes that I feel are supposed to be emotional are depreciated by the fact that not much changes after them. They have no real affect on the story because they are isolated events that feel like they were meant to simply take up space and add more words. I've already read this far, so I guess I have to finish the story, but I can only see it getting worse from here on out. Fair warning to anyone planning to read this story, be prepared to be disappointed but still intrigued.
Idk what to say, I'm just kinda disappointed. Good story, but there's a lot of unnecessary conflict. What's the point of giving Naruto anxiety if it gets solved the next chapter? What's the point of killing Naruto when he gets revived the next chapter? What's the point of having Naruto fight top tiers if he doesn't gain anything and doesn't loose anything? The original fight against Itachi and Kisame introduced the Akatsuki as a serious problem. This one did absolutely nothing to move the story forward. Like I said, I'm just kinda disappointed and dissatisfied with the overall flow of this story. It has so much potential, but I feel like it falls short a lot of the time. Many of the scenes that I feel are supposed to be emotional are depreciated by the fact that not much changes after them. They have no real affect on the story because they are isolated events that feel like they were meant to simply take up space and add more words. I've already read this far, so I guess I have to finish the story, but I can only see it getting worse from here on out. Fair warning to anyone planning to read this story, be prepared to be disappointed but still intrigued.
11/29/2020 c6 Cherufu
Who the fuck screwed up this fan fiction, these chapters are fucking awful, nothing like the first two chapters which were spectacular. Its pure crap now...
Who the fuck screwed up this fan fiction, these chapters are fucking awful, nothing like the first two chapters which were spectacular. Its pure crap now...