for The Hope of the Senju Clan11/29/2020 c6 Cherufu
Who the fuck screwed up this fan fiction, these chapters are fucking awful, nothing like the first two chapters which were spectacular. Its pure crap now...
Who the fuck screwed up this fan fiction, these chapters are fucking awful, nothing like the first two chapters which were spectacular. Its pure crap now...
11/28/2020 c7 
6Sam the binge reader
this was a retarded fucking chapter!
why did he even try to peek on them like an idiot?
why did they try to kill him immediately and went after him? spy? a kid? ffs!
and why did he even fight them? should have run away!
and god this story is fucking boring!
6Sam the binge readerthis was a retarded fucking chapter!
why did he even try to peek on them like an idiot?
why did they try to kill him immediately and went after him? spy? a kid? ffs!
and why did he even fight them? should have run away!
and god this story is fucking boring!
11/28/2020 c4 Sam the binge reader
naruto better be a chick magnet!
and oh fuck sasuke hope he does not try to befriend the jackass
naruto better be a chick magnet!
and oh fuck sasuke hope he does not try to befriend the jackass
11/28/2020 c3 Sam the binge reader
bah fuck konoha and fuck minato! should have pick some random child instead of his own!
bah fuck konoha and fuck minato! should have pick some random child instead of his own!
11/28/2020 c9 1Namikaze7
I know I am late but man it's annoying to read Jiraya getting beaten in every chapter by almost all the ladies. I mean it's like whenever he is there he is there to get beaten up by someone or other
1Namikaze7I know I am late but man it's annoying to read Jiraya getting beaten in every chapter by almost all the ladies. I mean it's like whenever he is there he is there to get beaten up by someone or other
11/24/2020 c1 Guest
Can someone please continue with this amazing Story or do I need to do it by myself again
Can someone please continue with this amazing Story or do I need to do it by myself again
11/5/2020 c15 Guest
3 anbu captain and yamato says he want more experienced team, that too for an A rank zabuza and B rank haku.
Author's gone blasphemically crazy.
3 anbu captain and yamato says he want more experienced team, that too for an A rank zabuza and B rank haku.
Author's gone blasphemically crazy.
11/5/2020 c3 Guest
I know i am late but i hope you dont turn him into 'i am gonna be everyone's friend and lay my life for whole village' guy.
Honestly writers just make naruto get into conclusion that he is gonna save his 'precious people' with his life. I am like why bro, you just started developing your thoughts and you stumble upon this shit nindo. A logical, a bit selfish, and mature naruto is what many fics lack. Make him act like a slow learner knucklehead if you want even but not like this.
I know i am late but i hope you dont turn him into 'i am gonna be everyone's friend and lay my life for whole village' guy.
Honestly writers just make naruto get into conclusion that he is gonna save his 'precious people' with his life. I am like why bro, you just started developing your thoughts and you stumble upon this shit nindo. A logical, a bit selfish, and mature naruto is what many fics lack. Make him act like a slow learner knucklehead if you want even but not like this.
11/1/2020 c20 Guest
You idot curse mark gets oofed by kutuma chakra idot
You idot curse mark gets oofed by kutuma chakra idot