for The Hope of the Senju Clan11/17/2024 c24 tranleyenhuynh2007
Bạn viết câu chuyển rất ổn, nhưng tôi muốn biết là nó có harem ko. Vì tôi thấy bạn xây dựng naruto theo kiểu lịch sự với phái nữ nhưng cứ ôm tay r nói chồng tương lại thì thật sự ko ổn, nếu nếu trong truyện naruto bít nên tránh xa những cô gái thì sao cứ để họ lại gần mình, thế thì cho hinata với naruto hoặc không ai cả
Bạn viết câu chuyển rất ổn, nhưng tôi muốn biết là nó có harem ko. Vì tôi thấy bạn xây dựng naruto theo kiểu lịch sự với phái nữ nhưng cứ ôm tay r nói chồng tương lại thì thật sự ko ổn, nếu nếu trong truyện naruto bít nên tránh xa những cô gái thì sao cứ để họ lại gần mình, thế thì cho hinata với naruto hoặc không ai cả
10/27/2024 c8 
46Ashera fanfics
"Keeping Naruto's identity secret", proceed to tell everyone they meet who Naruto is...not so secret if every important civilian character knows it, right?
About to drop the fic for Gary Stu-ness.
46Ashera fanfics"Keeping Naruto's identity secret", proceed to tell everyone they meet who Naruto is...not so secret if every important civilian character knows it, right?
About to drop the fic for Gary Stu-ness.
10/26/2024 c1 Damien Morgan
Jiraiya always was a creep he even made naruto turn to sexy jutsu and naruto was young that's how Jiraiya agreed to let naruto be his student lol
Jiraiya always was a creep he even made naruto turn to sexy jutsu and naruto was young that's how Jiraiya agreed to let naruto be his student lol
10/26/2024 c4 Ashera fanfics
Wow you managed to write Jiraiya's shenanigans in a barely creepy way! That's many steps less creepy than canon Jiraiya!
Wow you managed to write Jiraiya's shenanigans in a barely creepy way! That's many steps less creepy than canon Jiraiya!
10/12/2024 c1 1shahriarofndc
is there anyone who can finish the story... if not then i myself gonna finish this.. believe it!
1shahriarofndcis there anyone who can finish the story... if not then i myself gonna finish this.. believe it!
8/28/2024 c41 1bonniekey08
I have enjoyed your story. I do hope you continue it in the future. Ignore the hate because It really is a good story. Fan fiction isn't supposed to be perfect it's supposed to be a fun was to ask yourself "What If?" and get creative. I love how different this Naruto is yet his core remains unchanged. I am sure at this point you may have given up on the story because of all the time that has passed but I will keep my fingers crossed that it may continue in the future by some miracle.
1bonniekey08I have enjoyed your story. I do hope you continue it in the future. Ignore the hate because It really is a good story. Fan fiction isn't supposed to be perfect it's supposed to be a fun was to ask yourself "What If?" and get creative. I love how different this Naruto is yet his core remains unchanged. I am sure at this point you may have given up on the story because of all the time that has passed but I will keep my fingers crossed that it may continue in the future by some miracle.
4/5/2024 c8 Reviled l Deliver
lol now I remember why I stopped reading this fic. funny how I also stopped on this specific chapter name discovery.
naturally I prefer a long story like this and wouldn't even mind a couple of grammatical error here and there but after realizing I have to put up with this for the whole damn story and the fact that you even gave naruto the speech pattern of a high class nobility despite knowing you are already struggling with the normal one is just mind boggling.
why not remake this and put it on chat gpt or something.
lol now I remember why I stopped reading this fic. funny how I also stopped on this specific chapter name discovery.
naturally I prefer a long story like this and wouldn't even mind a couple of grammatical error here and there but after realizing I have to put up with this for the whole damn story and the fact that you even gave naruto the speech pattern of a high class nobility despite knowing you are already struggling with the normal one is just mind boggling.
why not remake this and put it on chat gpt or something.
3/7/2024 c1 Guest
Inspired is a bad word the first chapter first as well as most of the rest is gross plagiarism
Inspired is a bad word the first chapter first as well as most of the rest is gross plagiarism
3/1/2024 c33 mbrevig
Lol yep you wrote it so poorly you needed an exmachina to keep him alive. Done reading this.
Lol yep you wrote it so poorly you needed an exmachina to keep him alive. Done reading this.
3/1/2024 c25 mbrevig
Yep poor writing here. You decided to nerf Naruto to make the story more interesting but it backfired because your going to need an exmachina type level up to account for how week he is with the curse seal.
Yep poor writing here. You decided to nerf Naruto to make the story more interesting but it backfired because your going to need an exmachina type level up to account for how week he is with the curse seal.