for The Hope of the Senju Clan1/19/2020 c7 
2Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Quick question... Has anyone ever taught you real Japanese romanji before? Because you really need to work on it
2Kitsune Obsessed FreakQuick question... Has anyone ever taught you real Japanese romanji before? Because you really need to work on it
1/19/2020 c6 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
I'm pretty sure the name you should have used is Tatsuo. Not the random crap I see written here
I'm pretty sure the name you should have used is Tatsuo. Not the random crap I see written here
1/19/2020 c6 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
You obviously have no clue how to write japanese names in English and your grammar is bloody terrible. I hope it gets better soon
You obviously have no clue how to write japanese names in English and your grammar is bloody terrible. I hope it gets better soon
1/19/2020 c5 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Also it's Shuriken. And plural for senbon and kunai is senbon and kunai
Also it's Shuriken. And plural for senbon and kunai is senbon and kunai
1/19/2020 c5 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Omfg what happened to your grammar suddenly? It's so bad this chapter that I was tempted to just stop reading it, but then I remembered the last few and figured I should wait and see
Omfg what happened to your grammar suddenly? It's so bad this chapter that I was tempted to just stop reading it, but then I remembered the last few and figured I should wait and see
1/19/2020 c3 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Okay, I'm just going to say that when you called the kyuubi the most "fearful" that means the fox is scared of something. Not that it's something to be scared of. That would be "frightening"
Okay, I'm just going to say that when you called the kyuubi the most "fearful" that means the fox is scared of something. Not that it's something to be scared of. That would be "frightening"
1/19/2020 c3 Kitsune Obsessed Freak
Kushina was the last jinchuriki for the kyuubi in cannon. What was up with it this time? Just roaming around?
Kushina was the last jinchuriki for the kyuubi in cannon. What was up with it this time? Just roaming around?
1/15/2020 c41 Guest
The grammar is bad at first but you did a great job of improving later on.
Good job :)
The grammar is bad at first but you did a great job of improving later on.
Good job :)
1/15/2020 c41 Guest
This best Senju Naruto story in my opinon, one that is long, does not feel heavily rushed like alot of similar stories feel and is really enjoyable to read with alot of funny and entertaining moments.
You should continue the story from where it left of. It would really be a shame to see it permanently end after 41 long chapters.
This best Senju Naruto story in my opinon, one that is long, does not feel heavily rushed like alot of similar stories feel and is really enjoyable to read with alot of funny and entertaining moments.
You should continue the story from where it left of. It would really be a shame to see it permanently end after 41 long chapters.
1/9/2020 c19 indersingh220044
hmm that was interesing i was expecting you to have kurama kick orochimaru's seal out...
hmm that was interesing i was expecting you to have kurama kick orochimaru's seal out...
1/8/2020 c8 SmolomS
I didn't expect some characters from Bleach to appear. But it's pretty fun to read though so why not?
I didn't expect some characters from Bleach to appear. But it's pretty fun to read though so why not?
1/6/2020 c13 indersingh220044
hahaha i cant imagune just how did you manage to type/write this without laughing like crazy the entire time hahahaha.
hahaha i cant imagune just how did you manage to type/write this without laughing like crazy the entire time hahahaha.
1/5/2020 c41 Jhenifabray
it would be easier to let everyone know the truth sooner or later it will come out
it would be easier to let everyone know the truth sooner or later it will come out