for The Hope of the Senju Clan10/6/2019 c39 YacknessYT
Podrías por favor continuar con tu historia, ahora que leí tu increíble historia no puedo dormir me paso pensando que pasara con la historia o si hay alguien que la continué con tu permiso por favor pasarme el link :'v
Podrías por favor continuar con tu historia, ahora que leí tu increíble historia no puedo dormir me paso pensando que pasara con la historia o si hay alguien que la continué con tu permiso por favor pasarme el link :'v
10/2/2019 c3 TwistLuck.L
well the only think i ask my self now is
the kyuubi isnt lock inside Kushina ? - well i will wait and see what hapeend with that
well the only think i ask my self now is
the kyuubi isnt lock inside Kushina ? - well i will wait and see what hapeend with that
9/19/2019 c40 SolaraArcana
this story is so good, i could not put it down and if i did it would have been done so reluctantly. keep it up!
this story is so good, i could not put it down and if i did it would have been done so reluctantly. keep it up!
9/13/2019 c1 
2daspeedforce
Giving Naruto the curse mark is the worst writing mistake in Naruto fanfic history. It's just too stupid and too ridiculous to be considered creative writing. Let alone good writing. It's a blatant attempt to make Naruto overpowered and there is no conceivably possible reason to justify it. Its worsr because your Naruto is already too strong plus has the kyuubi. So fpr you to actually give him the curse mark makes me want to quit reading it. Idk what compelled you to do it. And its worse, because there was no reason why Anko wouldn't be there to intervene. The very fact she appeared seconds after is proof you took your writers omnipotence to blasphemous levels. To blatantly abuse that power so sloppily, and without any hesitation frankly pisses me off. That's the major problem with fanfiction. There must be narrative balance. Senju Mokuton second coming of Nidaime son of the Yellow Flash with Kyuubi having the curse Mark crosses the line.
2daspeedforceGiving Naruto the curse mark is the worst writing mistake in Naruto fanfic history. It's just too stupid and too ridiculous to be considered creative writing. Let alone good writing. It's a blatant attempt to make Naruto overpowered and there is no conceivably possible reason to justify it. Its worsr because your Naruto is already too strong plus has the kyuubi. So fpr you to actually give him the curse mark makes me want to quit reading it. Idk what compelled you to do it. And its worse, because there was no reason why Anko wouldn't be there to intervene. The very fact she appeared seconds after is proof you took your writers omnipotence to blasphemous levels. To blatantly abuse that power so sloppily, and without any hesitation frankly pisses me off. That's the major problem with fanfiction. There must be narrative balance. Senju Mokuton second coming of Nidaime son of the Yellow Flash with Kyuubi having the curse Mark crosses the line.
8/23/2019 c14 Roxas Lucist
And Narutos reason is why sakura is useless in Naruto. The original show. Now she does get more useful in the next series yes. But till then i view her as a filler. Please do not kill me sakura fans i am only stating my mind.
And Narutos reason is why sakura is useless in Naruto. The original show. Now she does get more useful in the next series yes. But till then i view her as a filler. Please do not kill me sakura fans i am only stating my mind.
8/22/2019 c6 Roxas Lucist
I take offense at how true it is to your statement 'all boys think girls have cooties at that age'
I take offense at how true it is to your statement 'all boys think girls have cooties at that age'
8/22/2019 c11 acholic
SHOW OFF, MOKUTON IS a TRUMP CARD
SHOW OFF, MOKUTON IS a TRUMP CARD
8/20/2019 c40 Samuel Santillan
es una buena historia no me dejes con las ganas
mete a kushina al harem
has que ya escoja a una
muestra su crecimiento en el manejo del mokuton, y tambien ya quiero que tenga un hijo aun asi sea por accidente y que la relacion entre el y la nietade hanzo floresca
mas rapido y tambien con yugito y samui por que todos queremos un poco de romance
y accion
es una buena historia no me dejes con las ganas
mete a kushina al harem
has que ya escoja a una
muestra su crecimiento en el manejo del mokuton, y tambien ya quiero que tenga un hijo aun asi sea por accidente y que la relacion entre el y la nietade hanzo floresca
mas rapido y tambien con yugito y samui por que todos queremos un poco de romance
y accion
8/19/2019 c41 Samuel Santillan
quiero mas harem que naruto se decidaya por alguna
inclue a kushina en el harem
quiero mas harem que naruto se decidaya por alguna
inclue a kushina en el harem
8/11/2019 c41 2TheRealCacto
Amazing story, I've been almost literally unable to put it down and have finished it in an amazing 3 days! Not even my place of work was safe from my leisurely reading XD
Please continue!
The only criticism I have for you is the extreme lack of training and growth you've allowed Naruto in the last majority of your story so far. I find it somewhat annoying.
2TheRealCactoAmazing story, I've been almost literally unable to put it down and have finished it in an amazing 3 days! Not even my place of work was safe from my leisurely reading XD
Please continue!
The only criticism I have for you is the extreme lack of training and growth you've allowed Naruto in the last majority of your story so far. I find it somewhat annoying.