for The Hope of the Senju Clan7/15/2019 c14 Sypho Dias
You know naruto and kushina should at least have a one night stand if not a relationship. With the uzumaki lifespan age would not really be an issue since kushina probably still looks like she is in her early twenties. Probably... are there going to be any lemons in this story though. Would love to read some.
You know naruto and kushina should at least have a one night stand if not a relationship. With the uzumaki lifespan age would not really be an issue since kushina probably still looks like she is in her early twenties. Probably... are there going to be any lemons in this story though. Would love to read some.
7/15/2019 c8 Sypho Dias
I dont think one person can have three summoning contracts... your grammar is horrible btw. And can we please have naruto x yugito pairing? That's one of da best and awesome pairings! She super cute and super awesome!
I dont think one person can have three summoning contracts... your grammar is horrible btw. And can we please have naruto x yugito pairing? That's one of da best and awesome pairings! She super cute and super awesome!
7/14/2019 c5 Sypho Dias
Didnt hashirama have a healing factor bcs of his mokuron? So naruto would have a much higher healing factor bcs of the kyuubi.
Didnt hashirama have a healing factor bcs of his mokuron? So naruto would have a much higher healing factor bcs of the kyuubi.
7/12/2019 c19 
1StarWriting0
This is the chapter that really killed the story. The plot quality severely drops after this chapter
1StarWriting0This is the chapter that really killed the story. The plot quality severely drops after this chapter
6/10/2019 c12 gg
why you make hime sound like he is hissing like a snake when he talks pretty sure he dosent talk like that
why you make hime sound like he is hissing like a snake when he talks pretty sure he dosent talk like that
6/4/2019 c41 Anon
Great potential, poor execution. Humor in the story was done well, as was Tsunade's character. Plot started off well, had some ups and downs in the middle, and declined towards the end. Naruto's strength level was inconsistent throughout fights which, along with his very canon like naiveté made him kind of annoying. Lack of real violence or killing also made the story feel more PG rated and like a Disney story than a ninja action read. It sort of took away the point of making some characters so strong if they aren't able to kill or at least fully defeat enemies. Grammar wasn't the best but author warned us before hand and it never truly altered the story itself. Despite the long length the story is fairly bingable thanks to the appeal and potential of Naruto being a Senju. It helps that much of the word count also goes to author's notes and describes at the end. I don't normally leave reviews but thought I would leave an honest opinion for this for anyone who is on the fence about reading due to its daunting length. To sum, has good potential but isn't without numerous flaws. Understandable for a fanfiction. A good time killer if you're bored and want something to skim.
Great potential, poor execution. Humor in the story was done well, as was Tsunade's character. Plot started off well, had some ups and downs in the middle, and declined towards the end. Naruto's strength level was inconsistent throughout fights which, along with his very canon like naiveté made him kind of annoying. Lack of real violence or killing also made the story feel more PG rated and like a Disney story than a ninja action read. It sort of took away the point of making some characters so strong if they aren't able to kill or at least fully defeat enemies. Grammar wasn't the best but author warned us before hand and it never truly altered the story itself. Despite the long length the story is fairly bingable thanks to the appeal and potential of Naruto being a Senju. It helps that much of the word count also goes to author's notes and describes at the end. I don't normally leave reviews but thought I would leave an honest opinion for this for anyone who is on the fence about reading due to its daunting length. To sum, has good potential but isn't without numerous flaws. Understandable for a fanfiction. A good time killer if you're bored and want something to skim.
6/3/2019 c10 Fredward1
The lack of ninja tactics is so dumb. Like he had the moment of surprise on them. He could have attacked him from the shadows but instead he fucking jumped in between them. ️
The lack of ninja tactics is so dumb. Like he had the moment of surprise on them. He could have attacked him from the shadows but instead he fucking jumped in between them. ️
6/3/2019 c4 Fredward1
The Akatsuki didn’t know about the plan to go after the biju until much much later. Their plans were to solely get as much money as possible. That’s it.
The Akatsuki didn’t know about the plan to go after the biju until much much later. Their plans were to solely get as much money as possible. That’s it.
6/2/2019 c1 Just Saying
Could've been better if Minato is actually the secret son of tsunade instead of a one night stand partner. That woud've been easier to believed and way more of a comfortable idea if you regard their age differences. (I know Tsunade looks hot but its just a genjutsu ya fool!)that way Naruto will still get his uzumaki blood while adding the Senju blood, which wouldve been a bigger surprised if he suddenly just use mokuton jutsus.
Could've been better if Minato is actually the secret son of tsunade instead of a one night stand partner. That woud've been easier to believed and way more of a comfortable idea if you regard their age differences. (I know Tsunade looks hot but its just a genjutsu ya fool!)that way Naruto will still get his uzumaki blood while adding the Senju blood, which wouldve been a bigger surprised if he suddenly just use mokuton jutsus.
6/1/2019 c41 Guest
What happened u are the best writer ive ever read
What happened u are the best writer ive ever read