for The Hope of the Senju Clan6/3/2019 c10 Fredward1
The lack of ninja tactics is so dumb. Like he had the moment of surprise on them. He could have attacked him from the shadows but instead he fucking jumped in between them. ️
The lack of ninja tactics is so dumb. Like he had the moment of surprise on them. He could have attacked him from the shadows but instead he fucking jumped in between them. ️
6/3/2019 c4 Fredward1
The Akatsuki didn’t know about the plan to go after the biju until much much later. Their plans were to solely get as much money as possible. That’s it.
The Akatsuki didn’t know about the plan to go after the biju until much much later. Their plans were to solely get as much money as possible. That’s it.
6/2/2019 c1 Just Saying
Could've been better if Minato is actually the secret son of tsunade instead of a one night stand partner. That woud've been easier to believed and way more of a comfortable idea if you regard their age differences. (I know Tsunade looks hot but its just a genjutsu ya fool!)that way Naruto will still get his uzumaki blood while adding the Senju blood, which wouldve been a bigger surprised if he suddenly just use mokuton jutsus.
Could've been better if Minato is actually the secret son of tsunade instead of a one night stand partner. That woud've been easier to believed and way more of a comfortable idea if you regard their age differences. (I know Tsunade looks hot but its just a genjutsu ya fool!)that way Naruto will still get his uzumaki blood while adding the Senju blood, which wouldve been a bigger surprised if he suddenly just use mokuton jutsus.
6/1/2019 c41 Guest
What happened u are the best writer ive ever read
What happened u are the best writer ive ever read
5/16/2019 c19 Guest
As far as I am aware, Orochimarus curse seal shouldn’t work on a Jinchūriki.
As far as I am aware, Orochimarus curse seal shouldn’t work on a Jinchūriki.
5/11/2019 c30 Guest
i feel like i just read 100K words
i feel like i just read 100K words
5/10/2019 c28 Guest
bro u keep burning poor sasuke. i like your story :) ive read over half in 2 days
bro u keep burning poor sasuke. i like your story :) ive read over half in 2 days
5/3/2019 c41 
2Malchior
You need to work out your characterization of Danzo. Danzo has and forth between Naruto being vital to the future of Konoha, and Naruto being vital expendable. Since Danzo knows Naruto is the descendant of Minato as well as Tsunade, and has the Mokuton, Danzo would NEVER risk Naruto's life. He is too valuable, especially since his children could inherit the bloodline.
Having a clan of Mokuton users is such a phenomenally powerful prospect, that literally anyone, even a clan, is expendable compared to Naruto. It's more powerful than the Sharingans, or Byakugan, or any other bloodline. A single skilled user can suppress a Biju, which is the ace-in-the-hole other villages have. An entire clan? Biju would never be seen as a threat again. Not against Konoha anyway. No one would like very be able to threaten a village surrounded by trees that can be manipulated by a clan of Mokuton users.
Not only that, Danzo also knows Naruto is the Namikaze heir, which, as established in the beginning of your story, owns something like 50 percent of the businesses in Konoha. Naruto could also, potentially, have access to Minato's famed jutsus. An entire clan of teleporting, lightning God Mokuton users? Danzo would happily slit his throat at the chances of that happening.
Tsunade should know this as well, so she should have been able to see through Danzo's bluff. Because it has to have been a bluff as Danzo would never sell out Naruto like that. He knows he is far too valuable to the village. Which also makes him using Naruto as bait so suspect.
Naruto can't be both irreplaceable, and expendable at the same time. But you seem to be flip-flopping on how Danzo sees Naruto. When Sai questioned Danzo on the possibility of Naruto dying, Danzo responded as if Naruto dying, and losing the Mokuton, the Senju blood, the Namikaze blood, etcetera, was merely a minor misfortune and not a major loss like it really would be.
Every single village in the Shinobi nations is, without a doubt, terrified of Naruto, the Genin who best two Jinchuriki in a single day, and helped defeat Orochimaru, while also driving back a surprise invasion from two different Shinobi villages. In a few years time, Naruto will be unstoppable, and every village leader knows this. His mere existence makes Konoha safer, because people will be afraid of him.
Also, as an aside, can you please stop with Naruto being "challenged" by people who are so far beneath him it's not even funny? Kurotsuchi is no threat to Naruto, and there is no way for her to ever be a threat to him in direct combat. So her being able to fight him for so long is completely ridiculous. At this point, Naruto is strong enough that only other Jinchuriki, and people like the Akatsuki should be a threat. Everyone else isn't even a blip on bus radar.
2MalchiorYou need to work out your characterization of Danzo. Danzo has and forth between Naruto being vital to the future of Konoha, and Naruto being vital expendable. Since Danzo knows Naruto is the descendant of Minato as well as Tsunade, and has the Mokuton, Danzo would NEVER risk Naruto's life. He is too valuable, especially since his children could inherit the bloodline.
Having a clan of Mokuton users is such a phenomenally powerful prospect, that literally anyone, even a clan, is expendable compared to Naruto. It's more powerful than the Sharingans, or Byakugan, or any other bloodline. A single skilled user can suppress a Biju, which is the ace-in-the-hole other villages have. An entire clan? Biju would never be seen as a threat again. Not against Konoha anyway. No one would like very be able to threaten a village surrounded by trees that can be manipulated by a clan of Mokuton users.
Not only that, Danzo also knows Naruto is the Namikaze heir, which, as established in the beginning of your story, owns something like 50 percent of the businesses in Konoha. Naruto could also, potentially, have access to Minato's famed jutsus. An entire clan of teleporting, lightning God Mokuton users? Danzo would happily slit his throat at the chances of that happening.
Tsunade should know this as well, so she should have been able to see through Danzo's bluff. Because it has to have been a bluff as Danzo would never sell out Naruto like that. He knows he is far too valuable to the village. Which also makes him using Naruto as bait so suspect.
Naruto can't be both irreplaceable, and expendable at the same time. But you seem to be flip-flopping on how Danzo sees Naruto. When Sai questioned Danzo on the possibility of Naruto dying, Danzo responded as if Naruto dying, and losing the Mokuton, the Senju blood, the Namikaze blood, etcetera, was merely a minor misfortune and not a major loss like it really would be.
Every single village in the Shinobi nations is, without a doubt, terrified of Naruto, the Genin who best two Jinchuriki in a single day, and helped defeat Orochimaru, while also driving back a surprise invasion from two different Shinobi villages. In a few years time, Naruto will be unstoppable, and every village leader knows this. His mere existence makes Konoha safer, because people will be afraid of him.
Also, as an aside, can you please stop with Naruto being "challenged" by people who are so far beneath him it's not even funny? Kurotsuchi is no threat to Naruto, and there is no way for her to ever be a threat to him in direct combat. So her being able to fight him for so long is completely ridiculous. At this point, Naruto is strong enough that only other Jinchuriki, and people like the Akatsuki should be a threat. Everyone else isn't even a blip on bus radar.
4/27/2019 c41 6JManM
An excellent story. It goes right up their with Naruto Hatake for stories about Naruto growing up with a family. While there is an awful lot of wasted words on characterization of side characters no one will ever care about, in all the plotting is top notch and the character interactions are believable and mostly fun to read. Damn shame the story was put down before a pay off to the build up.
6JManMAn excellent story. It goes right up their with Naruto Hatake for stories about Naruto growing up with a family. While there is an awful lot of wasted words on characterization of side characters no one will ever care about, in all the plotting is top notch and the character interactions are believable and mostly fun to read. Damn shame the story was put down before a pay off to the build up.
4/15/2019 c11 Brandon Boodoo
well so much for hiding his abilities and keeping his promise with jiraiya... guess Naruto never keeps his promises after all or maybe this author just fucked up...
well so much for hiding his abilities and keeping his promise with jiraiya... guess Naruto never keeps his promises after all or maybe this author just fucked up...