for The Hope of the Senju Clan1/5/2019 c11 Ahmed Maged
Your story is fucking stupied cliche lame shit
Naruto is so fucking fool it make me sick
And you with copy the canon just wow
I feel sad for you man
Your story is fucking stupied cliche lame shit
Naruto is so fucking fool it make me sick
And you with copy the canon just wow
I feel sad for you man
1/5/2019 c15 DADDY HARDERRRR
THIS IS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD FORGET MY NAME RN OOOOOOOOOOOF
THIS IS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD FORGET MY NAME RN OOOOOOOOOOOF
1/4/2019 c10 LUNIITIXSCALES
Not bad... oof
Not bad... oof
12/30/2018 c41 NomadicCloud
Very entertaining read. Hopefully the story gets updated soon but nevertheless thank you for writing this story
Very entertaining read. Hopefully the story gets updated soon but nevertheless thank you for writing this story
12/7/2018 c41 lonewolf420
Lol next few chapters won't take long to update... Last updated 2 YEARS ago. Damn must have been abandoned. Was a good story while it lasted. Had fight scenes that lasted too long where it made other characters look stupid or the whole town look week and completely unguarded in any way. But all in all it was a good little story. Wouldn't mind finding other such stories where Naruto is a sinju with or without the fourth being his dad. See there take on it.
Lol next few chapters won't take long to update... Last updated 2 YEARS ago. Damn must have been abandoned. Was a good story while it lasted. Had fight scenes that lasted too long where it made other characters look stupid or the whole town look week and completely unguarded in any way. But all in all it was a good little story. Wouldn't mind finding other such stories where Naruto is a sinju with or without the fourth being his dad. See there take on it.
12/3/2018 c31 quarttzblade12
I really liked the begining of the story but now I feel that all it is is an op naruto story with a harem that you can find anywhere
I really liked the begining of the story but now I feel that all it is is an op naruto story with a harem that you can find anywhere
12/3/2018 c34 lonewolf420
Good story but your way to into the battles that you don't even make any since. In the battle with the first and second hokaga one was cut in half once yet you never mentioned or I missed the replacement jutsu because next moment he's fighting again. One gets hit into the berior and burst into flames yet again moments later there both back in the fight. And with itatchi. Come on first off they are inside the fucking village second off Naruto has a fucking tracking seal on him that he activated a long as fucking time ago. There is no chance in hell any of this fight could have taken place much less the amount you put down. That training ground would have been flooded within 5 min tops. Sorry loved the story line but can't sift threw all this fighting just for the sake of it being ninjas or you trying to make cannon situations fit your character which would never have happened givin your characters skill and strength. Sorry last chapter I'll be reading. O u t.
Good story but your way to into the battles that you don't even make any since. In the battle with the first and second hokaga one was cut in half once yet you never mentioned or I missed the replacement jutsu because next moment he's fighting again. One gets hit into the berior and burst into flames yet again moments later there both back in the fight. And with itatchi. Come on first off they are inside the fucking village second off Naruto has a fucking tracking seal on him that he activated a long as fucking time ago. There is no chance in hell any of this fight could have taken place much less the amount you put down. That training ground would have been flooded within 5 min tops. Sorry loved the story line but can't sift threw all this fighting just for the sake of it being ninjas or you trying to make cannon situations fit your character which would never have happened givin your characters skill and strength. Sorry last chapter I'll be reading. O u t.
11/29/2018 c41 tallon2692
Thank you for the honor of reading such a great story i see you haven't updated in a long while i hope the story continues or if you have simply been updating the story on another site please let me know
Thank you for the honor of reading such a great story i see you haven't updated in a long while i hope the story continues or if you have simply been updating the story on another site please let me know