for The Hope of the Senju Clan11/8/2009 c1 Challenger
There problem here. It has been already pointed out Naruto is part of the Senju Clan in Manga by Madara. So may have just had Tsunade just had sex with her own Son & Minato with his own Mother.
There problem here. It has been already pointed out Naruto is part of the Senju Clan in Manga by Madara. So may have just had Tsunade just had sex with her own Son & Minato with his own Mother.
11/8/2009 c1 Skazi
Let's begin, 1st the chapter was OK to say the least. Now if Naruto is the hope for the Senju Clan this means he will be born with the Mokuton bloodline? Hopefully that's a yes. Now I found some of your writting kind of mess up, for example in one aspect at the end you place your A/N. But you fail to separated them from the main story chapter so pleace fix this issue.
Also will Naruto have Kyuubi seal inside his body? If yes, please have such information kept in secret just like in Senju Naruto by author Baal of Yarn that would make his lefe easier.
Let's begin, 1st the chapter was OK to say the least. Now if Naruto is the hope for the Senju Clan this means he will be born with the Mokuton bloodline? Hopefully that's a yes. Now I found some of your writting kind of mess up, for example in one aspect at the end you place your A/N. But you fail to separated them from the main story chapter so pleace fix this issue.
Also will Naruto have Kyuubi seal inside his body? If yes, please have such information kept in secret just like in Senju Naruto by author Baal of Yarn that would make his lefe easier.