for The Hope of the Senju Clan4/30/2023 c19 John A Reyes
The story line is good but your extremely long fight with the snake was too much too long, and it got very boring. Really 2/3 of the chapter was a fight just end up with a curse bite. Just my opinion but love the story other than that.
The story line is good but your extremely long fight with the snake was too much too long, and it got very boring. Really 2/3 of the chapter was a fight just end up with a curse bite. Just my opinion but love the story other than that.
4/29/2023 c8 
3SatanSan53
"Eh…No my lord since there was no need to since it was quite obvious that the boy is a commoner by the way he is dressed, my guess is he some low rank ordinary Genin from Konoha", spoke Kenryū.
Is he mentally retarded or just plain stupid? The idiot just signed his own dismissal papers, saying he was defeated by a weak genin.
3SatanSan53"Eh…No my lord since there was no need to since it was quite obvious that the boy is a commoner by the way he is dressed, my guess is he some low rank ordinary Genin from Konoha", spoke Kenryū.
Is he mentally retarded or just plain stupid? The idiot just signed his own dismissal papers, saying he was defeated by a weak genin.
4/28/2023 c2 SatanSan53
"Tell me, Tsunade, does anyone else know that you are pregnant with Minato's child or that you're pregnant at all?"
Everyone. Everyone in the village knows about it. Tsunade shouted it in a way that even a deaf would have heard.
"Tell me, Tsunade, does anyone else know that you are pregnant with Minato's child or that you're pregnant at all?"
Everyone. Everyone in the village knows about it. Tsunade shouted it in a way that even a deaf would have heard.
4/25/2023 c23 Guest
i think its kind a annoying that naruto still acts like fool oc naruto and jumps everywhere not needed
i think its kind a annoying that naruto still acts like fool oc naruto and jumps everywhere not needed
4/4/2023 c1 13Write Your Wrongs
WARNING! Don’t read this story! DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME! Naruto gets a curse mark for absolutely no reason in chapter 19, even though he has the kyuubi, mokuton, and a fucking family and people who give a shit about him. Plot goes down hill for cheap thrills and pointless drama. THIS STORY WILL PISS YOU OFF!
13Write Your WrongsWARNING! Don’t read this story! DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME! Naruto gets a curse mark for absolutely no reason in chapter 19, even though he has the kyuubi, mokuton, and a fucking family and people who give a shit about him. Plot goes down hill for cheap thrills and pointless drama. THIS STORY WILL PISS YOU OFF!
4/4/2023 c11 Write Your Wrongs
I would just fail the test and get a different team. They wouldn’t send the last Senju back to the academy anyways and this team is fucking unbalanced and doomed to fail in the first place.
I would just fail the test and get a different team. They wouldn’t send the last Senju back to the academy anyways and this team is fucking unbalanced and doomed to fail in the first place.
3/23/2023 c41 Aayan
When will you upload
When will you upload
3/9/2023 c41 Alpha vs meta
This was an amazing story i hope in the future it would continue
This was an amazing story i hope in the future it would continue
1/27/2023 c19 Guest
I didnt expect to run into a another fanfic that has orochimaru give naruto a curse mark also razor leaves and vine whip nothing against the writer i like it it scratches my pokemon loving itch
I didnt expect to run into a another fanfic that has orochimaru give naruto a curse mark also razor leaves and vine whip nothing against the writer i like it it scratches my pokemon loving itch
1/27/2023 c13 Guest
God i love this story top 10 for me and plus kushina and naruto pranking god...the village will never recover
God i love this story top 10 for me and plus kushina and naruto pranking god...the village will never recover