for The Hope of the Senju Clan5/26/2022 c41 proslayers
welll where are you its been 4 years scince you have uploaded a chapter please come back or
we must assume your rip
welll where are you its been 4 years scince you have uploaded a chapter please come back or
we must assume your rip
5/24/2022 c21 
3AlexanderTheGrey
The entire Exam arc just isn’t handled well.
It’s like Naruto is constantly being held back, has made no progress since he was 9, everyone suddenly matches or surpasses his physical abilities which should be ridiculous, his stamina (which should be monstrous) always seems to run out, I still don’t know why he focuses so much on kenjutsu when refining his taijutsu would be so much more efficient and powerful with his superhuman strength, and it’s just really forced.
3AlexanderTheGreyThe entire Exam arc just isn’t handled well.
It’s like Naruto is constantly being held back, has made no progress since he was 9, everyone suddenly matches or surpasses his physical abilities which should be ridiculous, his stamina (which should be monstrous) always seems to run out, I still don’t know why he focuses so much on kenjutsu when refining his taijutsu would be so much more efficient and powerful with his superhuman strength, and it’s just really forced.
5/24/2022 c19 AlexanderTheGrey
None of this cursed seal stuff should be happening.
This is so frustrating.
Konoha ninja also all suck at their jobs.
None of this cursed seal stuff should be happening.
This is so frustrating.
Konoha ninja also all suck at their jobs.
5/24/2022 c18 AlexanderTheGrey
Orochimaru and Kabuto sneaking into konoha I can believe due to how intimately familiar they are with its inner workings and Orochimaru’s Arsenal of freaky or messed up justsu, but some Rain shinobi who’s probably at Jonin level getting into a highly scrutinized testing without getting caught is just sad.
Konoha possibly not knowing that 3 ‘enemy’ jinchuriki were in the village also doesn’t make sense.
Also kind of annoyed at how inconsistent Naruto’s level seems to be.
Orochimaru and Kabuto sneaking into konoha I can believe due to how intimately familiar they are with its inner workings and Orochimaru’s Arsenal of freaky or messed up justsu, but some Rain shinobi who’s probably at Jonin level getting into a highly scrutinized testing without getting caught is just sad.
Konoha possibly not knowing that 3 ‘enemy’ jinchuriki were in the village also doesn’t make sense.
Also kind of annoyed at how inconsistent Naruto’s level seems to be.
5/22/2022 c41 Guest
where's the next chapter
where's the next chapter
5/20/2022 c41 Joshua Rubin
More chapters please
More chapters please