for Toxic Lightning5/4/2014 c1 
1Dphantom
Why didn't I review this story before the second one? While I was reading it, I wanted to play Jak II, like really bad. I freakin love those games. I feel that both stories did the game and my playing experience justice. I never really thought about what it would be like for the people living in game, and now that I've read your story, it got me thinking. Not only does it feel accurate but it... I don't know how to describe it. It made me feel satisfied and, like I said before, that you did the Jak and Daxter universe justice. I also love Tox and Jak's relationship.
1DphantomWhy didn't I review this story before the second one? While I was reading it, I wanted to play Jak II, like really bad. I freakin love those games. I feel that both stories did the game and my playing experience justice. I never really thought about what it would be like for the people living in game, and now that I've read your story, it got me thinking. Not only does it feel accurate but it... I don't know how to describe it. It made me feel satisfied and, like I said before, that you did the Jak and Daxter universe justice. I also love Tox and Jak's relationship.
11/26/2013 c13 Smouse
Kudos to you for writing an awesome fic!
Never thought I'd se the day I'd read a travel-between-worlds fic that didn't suck!
And not only that! You made me disapointed it ended so soon! Congrats! :)
Kudos to you for writing an awesome fic!
Never thought I'd se the day I'd read a travel-between-worlds fic that didn't suck!
And not only that! You made me disapointed it ended so soon! Congrats! :)
3/6/2011 c1 Jak fan
Nice.
Nice.
3/6/2011 c1 Jak fan
Nice.
Nice.
2/27/2010 c13 shadow wolf
noo! i didnt want it to end so soon! oh well ill just keep waitin for the sequel.. *sits down and stares at the computer*
noo! i didnt want it to end so soon! oh well ill just keep waitin for the sequel.. *sits down and stares at the computer*
2/20/2010 c12 Souldragon95
Oh no! Hurry up and write some more XD lol cant wait!
Oh no! Hurry up and write some more XD lol cant wait!
2/20/2010 c9 Souldragon95
Poor Tox, losing a friend is hard.
Poor Tox, losing a friend is hard.
2/20/2010 c7 Souldragon95
Dax is so cute. And Jak is...Jak X'D
Dax is so cute. And Jak is...Jak X'D
2/20/2010 c6 Souldragon95
Ooh its getting exciting!
Ooh its getting exciting!
2/20/2010 c5 Souldragon95
Yeah, it was a kinda strange chapter. Nevertheless enjoyable, cant wait to read more!
Yeah, it was a kinda strange chapter. Nevertheless enjoyable, cant wait to read more!
2/9/2010 c12 josh
GAH! Cliffie again...
I'll keep hanging then...
GAH! Cliffie again...
I'll keep hanging then...
2/1/2010 c1 22InvisibleJediMaster
I give up; I like it. For once, I actually like one of those 'she goes to his world' stories. I've been watching since about chapter six, but I wanted to wait and see if I really liked it enough to Alert. I finally gave up resisting the stereotype.
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What about Jak3?
22InvisibleJediMasterI give up; I like it. For once, I actually like one of those 'she goes to his world' stories. I've been watching since about chapter six, but I wanted to wait and see if I really liked it enough to Alert. I finally gave up resisting the stereotype.
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What about Jak3?