for Revenge of a broken heart8/19/2020 c5 Guest
Oh my gosh I love it! Please update though. I need more!
Oh my gosh I love it! Please update though. I need more!
8/15/2017 c5 
8Clarissa George306
I feel like you update every year or so. Its really strange and I hope you update again soon or at least more often because it has been more than three years since you've updated so I was just wondering what was going on. Well keep up the good work and stuff and I hope you update soon.
8Clarissa George306I feel like you update every year or so. Its really strange and I hope you update again soon or at least more often because it has been more than three years since you've updated so I was just wondering what was going on. Well keep up the good work and stuff and I hope you update soon.
6/22/2013 c2 TophxAang
I loved this chapter
I loved this chapter
6/22/2013 c1 TophxAang
Great first chapter :)
Great first chapter :)
6/19/2013 c5 Gureshingure
so cool! ! Please update! Please please please! ! PM me when new chapter is up ok! Thanks for writing!
so cool! ! Please update! Please please please! ! PM me when new chapter is up ok! Thanks for writing!
5/21/2013 c5 32julliet15
Wow, you did a really good job of keeping this guys in character! I can totally imagine Zuko behaving this way when he's crushing :P His confession was a little abrupt, but I'm hoping this means you're planning on expanding their relationship development in the coming chapters. I'm excited for the next update!
32julliet15Wow, you did a really good job of keeping this guys in character! I can totally imagine Zuko behaving this way when he's crushing :P His confession was a little abrupt, but I'm hoping this means you're planning on expanding their relationship development in the coming chapters. I'm excited for the next update!
7/13/2012 c4 34Ignorant Sparrow
I am a huge taang fan bt i always liked Toko as a ship. And it annoys me when people frame Toph to be -just to be- loud mouthed, sassy remarking, bratty arrogont girl. You have nicely developed her character so thanx! update soon.
34Ignorant SparrowI am a huge taang fan bt i always liked Toko as a ship. And it annoys me when people frame Toph to be -just to be- loud mouthed, sassy remarking, bratty arrogont girl. You have nicely developed her character so thanx! update soon.
2/12/2012 c3 zon12
I'm really enjoying this. I love how Zuko's the first one attracted to her and Toph being kind of oblivious to it lmao. And she was with Haru? Interesting...
I'm really enjoying this. I love how Zuko's the first one attracted to her and Toph being kind of oblivious to it lmao. And she was with Haru? Interesting...