for Dear God4/15/2012 c5 UnknownIdol
hahaha ... sorry in advance but...
the story is odd thought what else could it be when it happens to be about one freakin awesome band and so on ( oh yes i DO listen to a7x and this song just somehow happens to be one of my favourites )
i found few spelling fails and changes in pov (whitout telling it to have changed ) but they weren't that bad.
and then to the part i am sorry but cannot stop myself from writing it ...
this story is one of those cliches
(exspecially if you based the girl on yourself like most do) and for that reason i would rather have skipped some parts and ao on but anyway liked the story , just sadly not enough for fav
anyways write on and dont listen to anyone (not even me ) complaining about your stories cause they are your so you're allowed to make them anything you like
~ aKKurate - one you wish you never meet
hahaha ... sorry in advance but...
the story is odd thought what else could it be when it happens to be about one freakin awesome band and so on ( oh yes i DO listen to a7x and this song just somehow happens to be one of my favourites )
i found few spelling fails and changes in pov (whitout telling it to have changed ) but they weren't that bad.
and then to the part i am sorry but cannot stop myself from writing it ...
this story is one of those cliches
(exspecially if you based the girl on yourself like most do) and for that reason i would rather have skipped some parts and ao on but anyway liked the story , just sadly not enough for fav
anyways write on and dont listen to anyone (not even me ) complaining about your stories cause they are your so you're allowed to make them anything you like
~ aKKurate - one you wish you never meet
12/21/2010 c1 TrueVengence2287
Wow, this story was. Pretty good..I love drama and romance..It was very erotic but WOW!
Wow, this story was. Pretty good..I love drama and romance..It was very erotic but WOW!
11/12/2010 c5 
3demolitionsunsets
i like the concept, but some of your spelling was off & hard to follow points of view. no offense. other then that it was good.
3demolitionsunsetsi like the concept, but some of your spelling was off & hard to follow points of view. no offense. other then that it was good.
10/30/2010 c5 2RaisedByCas
Oh wow! By the time I finished reading this I was in tears. Dear God is one of my favourite songs and with the way you described the video they made for it ... Wow!
A great read, and I'm glad you wrote it.
2RaisedByCasOh wow! By the time I finished reading this I was in tears. Dear God is one of my favourite songs and with the way you described the video they made for it ... Wow!
A great read, and I'm glad you wrote it.
5/16/2010 c2 deadlyXXjoke
I have to say, that this story is absoutley amazing. I love it! :D! Great job!
I have to say, that this story is absoutley amazing. I love it! :D! Great job!
1/31/2010 c5 10GWTWTNME
This story was extremely intense. I'm glad that Brian didn't end up with Michelle because I hate her, but I wish Jimmy was in it more (he's my favorite):D
10GWTWTNMEThis story was extremely intense. I'm glad that Brian didn't end up with Michelle because I hate her, but I wish Jimmy was in it more (he's my favorite):D
11/18/2009 c2 a7x FAN xD
Brian vs Matt? lol we all know whos going to win that xxD
Brian vs Matt? lol we all know whos going to win that xxD
11/18/2009 c1 none
Holy Shiz Brian Jr!
Holy Shiz Brian Jr!