for It'll Always Be You1/6/2010 c3 crawfish4
I don't have a fiction press account but I will still read your stories because I LOVE THEM!
I don't have a fiction press account but I will still read your stories because I LOVE THEM!
11/18/2009 c2 
7Live.Laugh.Love37
wait is there a Prince & Me category now! i love that movie
you are continuing this story though right?
7Live.Laugh.Love37wait is there a Prince & Me category now! i love that movie
you are continuing this story though right?
11/11/2009 c1 Padiddle
Sorry, this is definitely not for me. Everyone seems out of character and the whole story idea seems very far-fetched.
Sorry, this is definitely not for me. Everyone seems out of character and the whole story idea seems very far-fetched.
11/11/2009 c1 3goodegirl24
i think it's really good! THe way i see it, 2 things could happen with this story, your story. One, you can make Kat into this mushy lovey dovey lets talk about our feelings girl who is desperate 4 Patrick and the story will suck, or two, u can remeber that they are both very closed of, ill never admit how i feel about u, stubborn people and it could be one of the best stories ive ever read. Odds are, it will be the first one, nut im gunna give u the benefit of the doubt and keep reading til u screw the whole thing up. Dont make kat this air-head dummy, dont make patrick this love struck hormonal boy, and don't make bianca desperate crawling all over him,and you'll be fine. I really hate the part where kat admits that its Patrick in the song. the real kat would never do that! she would lie! well, i suppose ill tell u when i stop reading just so u k that u should probobly stop writing then 2, because there is like a 99 percent chance that your next chapter will be the last chapter i read, but...God luck anyways. your going to need it
3goodegirl24i think it's really good! THe way i see it, 2 things could happen with this story, your story. One, you can make Kat into this mushy lovey dovey lets talk about our feelings girl who is desperate 4 Patrick and the story will suck, or two, u can remeber that they are both very closed of, ill never admit how i feel about u, stubborn people and it could be one of the best stories ive ever read. Odds are, it will be the first one, nut im gunna give u the benefit of the doubt and keep reading til u screw the whole thing up. Dont make kat this air-head dummy, dont make patrick this love struck hormonal boy, and don't make bianca desperate crawling all over him,and you'll be fine. I really hate the part where kat admits that its Patrick in the song. the real kat would never do that! she would lie! well, i suppose ill tell u when i stop reading just so u k that u should probobly stop writing then 2, because there is like a 99 percent chance that your next chapter will be the last chapter i read, but...God luck anyways. your going to need it