
11/12/2009 c1
5sammie77
Nicely done. Always thought Pete was a nice guy - just not for Sam. Very well written!

Nicely done. Always thought Pete was a nice guy - just not for Sam. Very well written!
11/11/2009 c1 pain in the mikta
Nice insightful look into this relationship.
And the last paragraph, well, can't be denied that the General is THE man!
;-)
Thanks for sharing this!
Nice insightful look into this relationship.
And the last paragraph, well, can't be denied that the General is THE man!
;-)
Thanks for sharing this!
11/11/2009 c1
93VGWrighte
A little bit darker than I think Pete's character actually was, but I liked it a lot. The story wouldn't have been good if you had tried to go a little brighter, so good job.

A little bit darker than I think Pete's character actually was, but I liked it a lot. The story wouldn't have been good if you had tried to go a little brighter, so good job.
11/11/2009 c1
8SammieAtHome
Loved the story. About adding info to your profile. When you log in into your account you should have at the top left corner of your screen an option "Profile". When you click on it you are taken to a part of the menu with Edit profile and a field with "word" options to write whatever you want.

Loved the story. About adding info to your profile. When you log in into your account you should have at the top left corner of your screen an option "Profile". When you click on it you are taken to a part of the menu with Edit profile and a field with "word" options to write whatever you want.
11/11/2009 c1
2MuseUrania
I like this. :) I've seen another similar one, but there are enough differences for this story to stand on its own merits. Completely different ending for example, and I like that. Made it not just about the team but also Sam.

I like this. :) I've seen another similar one, but there are enough differences for this story to stand on its own merits. Completely different ending for example, and I like that. Made it not just about the team but also Sam.