for Afternoon Sex5/8/2012 c1 
10Sexykill69
Greatly improved writing style, Clear, concise, demure and sexy. I enjoyed this And I don't even watch it. Beautiful kiss description, I had to change my panties! XD Too much imagery, in a good way. My only problem is, they didn't have any lube. And that is a no no my friend. But This, "They lay together; Kaoru making sure he wasn't completely on top of Ryou by supporting his chest with his arms. Ryou noticed, tsked, and pulled him down. He sighed and rubbed his legs against Kaoru's legs, the feeling of unadulterated bliss still coursing through his body. Kaoru smiled, pressing his lips against Ryou's lips as he stared into dark eyes that would only ever look at him with such an unguarded look." Was Damn Near the Cutest thing I've ever read, and gave me warm fuzzies all over. I nearly died choking on the love, and it would have been fine with me3
10Sexykill69Greatly improved writing style, Clear, concise, demure and sexy. I enjoyed this And I don't even watch it. Beautiful kiss description, I had to change my panties! XD Too much imagery, in a good way. My only problem is, they didn't have any lube. And that is a no no my friend. But This, "They lay together; Kaoru making sure he wasn't completely on top of Ryou by supporting his chest with his arms. Ryou noticed, tsked, and pulled him down. He sighed and rubbed his legs against Kaoru's legs, the feeling of unadulterated bliss still coursing through his body. Kaoru smiled, pressing his lips against Ryou's lips as he stared into dark eyes that would only ever look at him with such an unguarded look." Was Damn Near the Cutest thing I've ever read, and gave me warm fuzzies all over. I nearly died choking on the love, and it would have been fine with me3
7/19/2011 c1 ChaosFortuna
in my opinion, you should re-write the story offline reality as an "M" rated fic. i liked it alot, and i think that you should totally put smut in it. just a thought, oh btw amazing one-shot here. =)
Chaos
in my opinion, you should re-write the story offline reality as an "M" rated fic. i liked it alot, and i think that you should totally put smut in it. just a thought, oh btw amazing one-shot here. =)
Chaos
3/21/2011 c1 1Vendria
Gah that was so wonderfully hot! 33 We need more of this fandom because it is just so damn perfect!
1VendriaGah that was so wonderfully hot! 33 We need more of this fandom because it is just so damn perfect!
5/26/2010 c1 XXIIV
I only have one thing to say: it cant be UNADULTERATING. They had sex! Thats adulterating in the purest sense of the word!
I only have one thing to say: it cant be UNADULTERATING. They had sex! Thats adulterating in the purest sense of the word!
3/7/2010 c1 itwalksonwater
omgomgomg u wanna write another one? please? just for me plox? anyways i think u can tell i loved it!
omgomgomg u wanna write another one? please? just for me plox? anyways i think u can tell i loved it!