for The Joker Doll3/29/2020 c14 Kain129
Thanks for a great new chapter I missed the dolls hope u don't forget about it again _
Thanks for a great new chapter I missed the dolls hope u don't forget about it again _
3/26/2020 c12 GamerX568
Naruto isn't 3 years older than Sasuke! Sasuke's older by 3 months! Mikoto was even holding him when she saw Kushina on the night of Naruto's Birth.
Naruto isn't 3 years older than Sasuke! Sasuke's older by 3 months! Mikoto was even holding him when she saw Kushina on the night of Naruto's Birth.
1/25/2017 c13 Jj
Cute
Cute
55/29/2015 c12 Morreth.is.cool
Okay, this will be a long review, haha, so be prepared. I loved this chapter as I loved all of these chapters. Me and a friend of mine (Helsng-Naru-Bleach) were discussing what should be added next. We thought up a few things.
1. You should add Azula, Harvey Two-face, and as dolls
2. Naruto should have a harem! of guys and girls (but mostly guys hahaha)
ex. Sasuke (Completed :P), Deidara (for his insanity *My friend suggested for ya' to make Deidara a girl, But I say leave him as a guy, hehehe*), Konan *from naruto* (for an artistic addition), and Itachi (see 3.)
3. Itachi should walk up to Naruto at some point, ready for a fight, then see Sasuke, make a bee-line to him, look him over, sense what happened, then turn to Naruto and say, "What the hell have you done to my brother?!" To which Naruto will offer a glass of "Lemonade" (Love Potion) to Itachi, because he's worked up. Itachi drinks it. Now Naruto can look at Sai and the dolls and say "Boom, now I have a matching set of pets!"
Ok I hope you update soon, and I gives you hugs! Write on, cause you're amazing!
Now, onward to the next chapter!
Okay, this will be a long review, haha, so be prepared. I loved this chapter as I loved all of these chapters. Me and a friend of mine (Helsng-Naru-Bleach) were discussing what should be added next. We thought up a few things.
1. You should add Azula, Harvey Two-face, and as dolls
2. Naruto should have a harem! of guys and girls (but mostly guys hahaha)
ex. Sasuke (Completed :P), Deidara (for his insanity *My friend suggested for ya' to make Deidara a girl, But I say leave him as a guy, hehehe*), Konan *from naruto* (for an artistic addition), and Itachi (see 3.)
3. Itachi should walk up to Naruto at some point, ready for a fight, then see Sasuke, make a bee-line to him, look him over, sense what happened, then turn to Naruto and say, "What the hell have you done to my brother?!" To which Naruto will offer a glass of "Lemonade" (Love Potion) to Itachi, because he's worked up. Itachi drinks it. Now Naruto can look at Sai and the dolls and say "Boom, now I have a matching set of pets!"
Ok I hope you update soon, and I gives you hugs! Write on, cause you're amazing!
Now, onward to the next chapter!
5/28/2015 c10 Morreth.is.cool
I hope you are doing okay there, *blocks all projectiles thrown at you, then gives you a hug*
I liked this Chapter and I hope you update more soon ;)
Hakuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *glomps! more sai-haku, and moar sasuke-naruto! nice chapter, and while Azula is my 1st choice for the doll, I'd say Cesare Borgia (Assassin's Creed/History) would make a nice addition. He's insanely hawt-*slap* sorry haha spaced out, he's brilliant, fights with swords & pistols, is another mass murderer, has an incestuous relationship with his sister, *and possibly some guys ;)* ummm he's a tactition and i think thats all Haha now on to the next chapter!
I hope you are doing okay there, *blocks all projectiles thrown at you, then gives you a hug*
I liked this Chapter and I hope you update more soon ;)
Hakuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu! *glomps! more sai-haku, and moar sasuke-naruto! nice chapter, and while Azula is my 1st choice for the doll, I'd say Cesare Borgia (Assassin's Creed/History) would make a nice addition. He's insanely hawt-*slap* sorry haha spaced out, he's brilliant, fights with swords & pistols, is another mass murderer, has an incestuous relationship with his sister, *and possibly some guys ;)* ummm he's a tactition and i think thats all Haha now on to the next chapter!
5/28/2015 c9 Morreth.is.cool
I love your Author's notes, their almost as funny as the story :p Great chapter too haha, Yaoi please! Naruto should have a harem & have sasuke, and deidara should be the first two in it Hahahahahaha. hmmm, I still vote for Azula as the next doll :p onward!
I love your Author's notes, their almost as funny as the story :p Great chapter too haha, Yaoi please! Naruto should have a harem & have sasuke, and deidara should be the first two in it Hahahahahaha. hmmm, I still vote for Azula as the next doll :p onward!
5/28/2015 c8 Morreth.is.cool
Bahahahahaha "Ding dong the witch is dead! Which old witch? The Wicked Witch!" Nice Chapter :p lots of love, now onward!
Bahahahahaha "Ding dong the witch is dead! Which old witch? The Wicked Witch!" Nice Chapter :p lots of love, now onward!
5/28/2015 c7 Morreth.is.cool
Nice chapter, and an epic, funny story! I loved it, and from you'r hint in this chapter, (Killing Sakura) I have a feeling I'll like the next chapters even more. I would like to see Naruto-Sasuke and Sai-Kiba yaoi teehee. And I thought up a new doll for you if you're still interested in adding one. Princess Azula (from avatar the last airbender) her personality is sadistic, manipulative, obsessed with power, skilled strategist, perfectionist, with deep mental instabilities (Mommy issues) which led to a mental breakdown. she can shoot lightening from her fingertips, and can create/bend fire to her will.
-now on to next chapter lol!
Nice chapter, and an epic, funny story! I loved it, and from you'r hint in this chapter, (Killing Sakura) I have a feeling I'll like the next chapters even more. I would like to see Naruto-Sasuke and Sai-Kiba yaoi teehee. And I thought up a new doll for you if you're still interested in adding one. Princess Azula (from avatar the last airbender) her personality is sadistic, manipulative, obsessed with power, skilled strategist, perfectionist, with deep mental instabilities (Mommy issues) which led to a mental breakdown. she can shoot lightening from her fingertips, and can create/bend fire to her will.
-now on to next chapter lol!
5/28/2015 c6 Morreth.is.cool
Yesssss! Yaoi please :) I like this story, and although I do not have any ideas for another doll, I'll think of one!
Yesssss! Yaoi please :) I like this story, and although I do not have any ideas for another doll, I'll think of one!