
11/17/2011 c1
15sonicmilahedgie
I loved it but make it more funny please? It was kind of...boring in the beginning but good towards the end so please make this story funny xD

I loved it but make it more funny please? It was kind of...boring in the beginning but good towards the end so please make this story funny xD
11/12/2009 c1
6feralfairy
This sounds interesting but... You may want to make the chapters longer and/or elaborate the summary.

This sounds interesting but... You may want to make the chapters longer and/or elaborate the summary.