for I Loved Her First9/4/2012 c1 thisaccountisgonedonedeleted
I absolutely loved this! I always loved coming up with stories from the perspective of the townsfolk in the Fable games. This is just fabulous. A very sad, heartfelt rendition of how a vendor would feel if enamored with a famous heroine.
I absolutely loved this! I always loved coming up with stories from the perspective of the townsfolk in the Fable games. This is just fabulous. A very sad, heartfelt rendition of how a vendor would feel if enamored with a famous heroine.
8/14/2010 c1 
8december.s-flower
aw, but the pie stand guy is kinda cute... _
lol
actually, all guys in fable 2 are sort of scary looking. And I think your story can be attributed to many a citizen all over Albion. And this is from personal experience. All my character has to do is walk into town and she's swarmed by people with hearts over their heads, all proposing for a good time or hinting at marriage.
Poor, desperate souls
8december.s-floweraw, but the pie stand guy is kinda cute... _
lol
actually, all guys in fable 2 are sort of scary looking. And I think your story can be attributed to many a citizen all over Albion. And this is from personal experience. All my character has to do is walk into town and she's swarmed by people with hearts over their heads, all proposing for a good time or hinting at marriage.
Poor, desperate souls
6/1/2010 c1 11MissKIA
I really loved this story. I loved how you took a generic character and gave him a life, personality and history. It was nice to see life given to a nothing character. I loved it!
11MissKIAI really loved this story. I loved how you took a generic character and gave him a life, personality and history. It was nice to see life given to a nothing character. I loved it!
3/7/2010 c1 633yellow 14
Go figure. Actually, being proposed to by complete strangers gets anoying after a while, so I see where you're coming from;D Keep updating, or writing.
633yellow 14Go figure. Actually, being proposed to by complete strangers gets anoying after a while, so I see where you're coming from;D Keep updating, or writing.
12/30/2009 c1 16narutofanforever101
Nice story. Sorta reminds me when I always start a new game I always marry the clothing merchant in Bowerstone old town. I am going to write the story of my character soon. Man it will be long.
16narutofanforever101Nice story. Sorta reminds me when I always start a new game I always marry the clothing merchant in Bowerstone old town. I am going to write the story of my character soon. Man it will be long.
12/21/2009 c1 8Anonymous Echo
This is awesome. XD I love this. I always imagine what the hell is going through their minds, haha.
8Anonymous EchoThis is awesome. XD I love this. I always imagine what the hell is going through their minds, haha.
12/19/2009 c1 5allymcg777
If I were you and I wrote this I would get depressed and go and mary him immediately being the type of person that makes personalities where there aren't any. I hope you continue this I am... intrigued to find out what happens. Wow long review :)
5allymcg777If I were you and I wrote this I would get depressed and go and mary him immediately being the type of person that makes personalities where there aren't any. I hope you continue this I am... intrigued to find out what happens. Wow long review :)