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2/1/2023 c44 ClaceLover08
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Rose & Em are Married & i am happy that Ali & Jazz are Married & I am happy that Everybody has Beautiful Children's
2/13/2021 c44 valentina.delafuente
Exelente :)
11/16/2020 c35 Guest
How did Tanya get into the same "program" that Edward is in? If she started late, she would be taking different, less advanced courses.

This is stupid, but this story is complete. Might as well finish.
11/16/2020 c34 Guest
Yeah...a professor would just volunteer a student to tutor another... right...
11/15/2020 c27 Guest
Does Edward not have a job?

And he's a complete idiot for not only being mysteriously away for two months, but springing James on her, saying they'll all live together?

What an ass.
11/15/2020 c26 Guest
I've been with my husband for 30 years. Married for 26 of them. If he took off for TWO MONTHS and didn't tell me why, I'd be PISSED.

This is not a situation where he should be complaining that Bella doesn't trust him.

TWO FUCKING MONTHS?!

That's ridiculous soap opera shit.
11/13/2020 c25 Guest
I'm sorry. I like the story, but this chapter... it screams a teenager wrote it. Or someone writing a bad teenage movie. Very cliche. But then, is it a teen with a thing for 80s music?
11/13/2020 c24 Guest
What kind of insensitive prick of a teacher would introduce a project like that to a student who just lost a baby?

This is a small school. This is something that they would put a student in a temporary, independent study for.
11/12/2020 c16 Guest
If bella was otherwise healthy and physically active, there's no reason she should stop running at TWO MONTHS PREGNANT! I'm assuming the author isn't a mom. Anything she was doing normally, she could continue to do throughout her pregnancy unless there was something else wrong.

And if Bella's intent was to not be pregnant, why would she pay extra money to take her birth control pills AND buy antibiotics? She works just not take her pill! I hope that's addressed.
11/12/2020 c13 Guest
Damn! Bella is taking it up the ass! That's pretty damn adventurous for a couple of recent virgins!
11/12/2020 c7 Guest
Edward is on track to go to college and eventually become a doctor, and you expect us to believe that loser James is in the same math class as he is?

I grew up in a small town and went to a small high school. There were different levels in math even then.
11/12/2020 c4 Guest
Why does Carlisle tell him "good night" at the end of the conversation? Edward woke up at sunrise and went straight home. Were his parents taking to him that long, that it spanned all day and no one else came out of bed?
8/11/2020 c24 Guest
This story should be taken down. It enables rape culture and enforces the "boys will be boys" mentality. Stories like this is what's wrong with America. Why couldn't Bella learn from that experience and become an independent successful woman? Why have her going back to him like a blithering bimbo? You've disgraced twilight, Stephanie Meyer, and all of the characters with this story. DISGUSTING!
11/25/2019 c44 Guest
Umm. I feel like the author wrote this at a really young age. Or maybe I’m giving a grown-up an excuse for this immature story line.
2/2/2019 c5 Guest
I don't understand why this Bella just forgive Edward just because he said he loves her. I mean, she didn't even played hard to get and make him fucking grovelled on her feet. He fucking humiliated her. In front of both their families. And he just said "I love you" everything becomes so fucking fine and dandy. I like the plot but i dont think I can read this. Cheers
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