for Raw Nerve11/7/2011 c10 Snowkid
"Make sure of what? That my sensei wasn't raping me! Where does your mind go when its not in the gutter?"
Ok thats the best sentence I read in a loooooong time *can't stop laughing*
I wanna see anko kick that kids ass!
"Make sure of what? That my sensei wasn't raping me! Where does your mind go when its not in the gutter?"
Ok thats the best sentence I read in a loooooong time *can't stop laughing*
I wanna see anko kick that kids ass!
3/21/2011 c19 
11Jigoku-Dayu93
Man, this is an awesome fic! You have to finish it! By the way, who doesn't dream of hot, sweaty Orochimaru? Mmm...
11Jigoku-Dayu93Man, this is an awesome fic! You have to finish it! By the way, who doesn't dream of hot, sweaty Orochimaru? Mmm...
11/25/2010 c19 7NinjaSheik
Lacking details a lot, and I spot a lot of mistakes.
You haven't updated this in over a year. When are you going to finish? And what about the other one you started?
Update soon~!
7NinjaSheikLacking details a lot, and I spot a lot of mistakes.
You haven't updated this in over a year. When are you going to finish? And what about the other one you started?
Update soon~!
7/7/2010 c19 Love'sDarkShadow
UGh! cruelty! i hate cliff hangers! DX plz continue soon! :3
UGh! cruelty! i hate cliff hangers! DX plz continue soon! :3
7/7/2010 c12 Love'sDarkShadow
i really like your story so far. =) Ohiko is such a little punk! XD but i really like it! keep up the good work
i really like your story so far. =) Ohiko is such a little punk! XD but i really like it! keep up the good work
1/28/2010 c19 Guest
WHO! SAY SOMETHING!
WHO! SAY SOMETHING!
1/28/2010 c19 81Ryunn Kazan
YOUR BACK, HELL YA!
Let it be that Yakiko guy Jiraiya
Good to have you back
-RK
81Ryunn KazanYOUR BACK, HELL YA!
Let it be that Yakiko guy Jiraiya
Good to have you back
-RK
1/14/2010 c1 Ryunn Kazan
ONE YEAR. ARE YOU SERIOUS?
You better have a whole bunch of sequals in you computer
Update Soon
-RK
ONE YEAR. ARE YOU SERIOUS?
You better have a whole bunch of sequals in you computer
Update Soon
-RK
1/2/2010 c18 2AngelQueen13
Cute chapter! It makes me so happy to see Orochimaru care for Anko in this chapter. Really cute. ^^
2AngelQueen13Cute chapter! It makes me so happy to see Orochimaru care for Anko in this chapter. Really cute. ^^
1/1/2010 c17 Guest
poor guy
poor guy
12/31/2009 c17 AngelQueen13
Poor Jiraiya, he keeps getting beat up. XD Oh well, at least Orochimaru will have some help figuring out why him and Anko are being questioned.
Poor Jiraiya, he keeps getting beat up. XD Oh well, at least Orochimaru will have some help figuring out why him and Anko are being questioned.