for Raw Nerve11/23/2009 c9 
4Lynn Richards
WAH! Too short! Post new chapter now! teehee. Although the shortness made it sound almost poetic. I liked it. ^.^
4Lynn RichardsWAH! Too short! Post new chapter now! teehee. Although the shortness made it sound almost poetic. I liked it. ^.^
11/21/2009 c7 maple-leaf96
wow
i really like this story
sry for the short review but i gtg.
Its a good story so good job~
keep it up~
*thumbs up*
wow
i really like this story
sry for the short review but i gtg.
Its a good story so good job~
keep it up~
*thumbs up*
11/18/2009 c7 4Lynn Richards
I am enjoying reading this piece. I loved how you started it out with Anko getting teased to set a light tone to it and how you have bounced back and forth between humor and seriousness to keep it variated. This fanfic definitely has my interest! Im looking forward to the next chapter!
4Lynn RichardsI am enjoying reading this piece. I loved how you started it out with Anko getting teased to set a light tone to it and how you have bounced back and forth between humor and seriousness to keep it variated. This fanfic definitely has my interest! Im looking forward to the next chapter!
11/16/2009 c5 AngelQueen13
aw! good job, Orochimaru! *hugs*
Amazing chapter, I was really hoping that he'd show up. :3
aw! good job, Orochimaru! *hugs*
Amazing chapter, I was really hoping that he'd show up. :3
11/16/2009 c4 AngelQueen13
oh you silly sannin you. You shouldn't toy with Anko like that. XD Very cute chapter! ^^
oh you silly sannin you. You shouldn't toy with Anko like that. XD Very cute chapter! ^^
11/16/2009 c4 crimsonwolf333
...woah, 0.0 0_0 0_0 XD
...woah, 0.0 0_0 0_0 XD
11/16/2009 c3 Guest
short but sweet
short but sweet
11/16/2009 c3 AngelQueen13
Aw! Orochimaru you're so cute! 3 i love how he handled the situation, something he'd definently do. :3
Aw! Orochimaru you're so cute! 3 i love how he handled the situation, something he'd definently do. :3
11/15/2009 c2 AngelQueen13
wah! Orochimaru appeared! Omg happy days! xD I really hope you continue updating, these stories give me something to look forward to. ^^
wah! Orochimaru appeared! Omg happy days! xD I really hope you continue updating, these stories give me something to look forward to. ^^
11/15/2009 c2 crimsonwolf333
funny so far!
continue please!
funny so far!
continue please!
11/15/2009 c1 AngelQueen13
omg, what a perfect start to a story! XD
Personally, I would totally think of Orochimaru that way. XD
omg, what a perfect start to a story! XD
Personally, I would totally think of Orochimaru that way. XD